finished i killed it with the wrack background =/ oh well its to late now [Broken External Image]:http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00046-3.jpg?t=1207935600
Wack shit caimer, thicken your letters and go back to simples, The c and a are half decent though. Trying to bite rots R? Amk- nice style. S is killer. Stim- nice simple. Atlok- lose them little skinny bars that connect from one letter to the other, and lose the arrow on the left. Letters arent to bad but im not feeling that style at all, to many seperated bars. Rsakens- feelin that colour scheme and the letters, just drop those extensions and sraighten the letters abit. Sanrtizer- that styles heading in a nice sirection, just lose that extension on the top left of the K. Jetpack- feelin it. Mosez- that Red M is fucking firee. Vois- that orange simple is nice, just keep practicing, and sort your S out. Skeelo- wrong thread. Hp zone- really not feeling it, the long skinny bars and bulky bits at the end just arent working for me.
are u remidial? that shit is simple, i love this site cuss toys just regurgitate the same phrases without knowing wat they mean amk im really ot feelin that stuff but its personal prefrence
i was actually gonna say the same thing sketch.. haha atlok, its nice, but stop bumping it. do up a new sketch. hpzone, give crits to get em. i like the steeze, but im having a bit of trouble reading some of the letters rsakens, your 3Ds a bit off one some of your letters. and im not feelign your E really. but overall it's good. new sketch, with and without cracks. im not feeling the cracks, but i'll put em up anyways. and i always run outta the room for the two [Broken External Image]:http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/9477/tank6qu3.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/6832/tank5ak8.jpg
You say that as if your brave or somethin. You have never painted, so to call me a toy. And jetpack, get your tongue out of hazes ass ive seen it the last few pages. You all know his shits wack whther you say it or not.
um i never said i wasnt a toy, and i used to paint wen i first started, but i stoped to work on letters. then college came up jetpack HUGE improvement
im going into college and i paint as much as i can..well im actually look at joining the Royal Navy or even the Commando Marines...but thats if i dont get an apprenticeship...wheres the peice you helped fill Sketch..it was crazy ! tank..nice stuff mannnnn
how the fuck do i always manage to get second from the bottom. thanks sketch and mass can you actually find something to crit, i hate when i get spoonfed. i cant improve with compliments
no..the SBS are the hardest cunts in the country and Tank..maybe the T ..its kinda fat....if you know..and the lil doo dad onit dont work neither...its like to small / narrow.
first off cunts need to stop cryin when they get real crits. harden the fuck up.. second half the crits get taken wrong, people are like straight tellin eachother wat to do to a style or sketch. but what the fuck if what they are telling to be changed is what defines a certain style.... get me?? IE. t-bur, who are you to tell someone to thicken there letters?? nothing wrong witht thin letters so long as they proportioned. TANK - your cracks aint realistic, you need to think how it would really look, there would be holes in it, there would be lil chunks missing from the cracks where its fallen away, the cracks on the edge of the letters would be lil a chip into the straigt contour of the letter.... make sense?? thats all im crittin cuz cunt continuously blow me out for crits
im chill, just realised how much ppl take everything said on here to heart. not likethekid has to thicken em up. blah figur u know me huh?? haha
thanks nemz, i havent been good with cracks cuz its hard to find a good example of cracks to learn from. that helps a lot, ill have another sketch up later on with some hopefully better cracks.