luv em drips hmm Rein i think the r wud need some work on it n sober dats mean Kobra i reckon u shud lose the arrows My 2 cents =D View attachment 361790 crits? im can't find a tag name atm so im trying out various random words View attachment 361791
Me trying to go simple: [Broken External Image]:http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y134/historical/Graf/DSC01191.jpg What the simple turned into: [Broken External Image]:http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y134/historical/Graf/DSC01244.jpg I like the last one. Crits please?
Leche, Put your letters closer together I don't really like how the C cross's the H either but keep working on it
alright i true this one in here simple but o well up is up [Broken External Image]:http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00031-6.jpg
Whats up everyone Im completely new to this and want to start getting better I thought of my tag the other day its EYKID like "hey kid" or "I Kid" this is the first tag i have ever done just looking for some feedback any criticism would be good im here to improve my game I know i suck right now and just viewing alot of your tags is great.
eykid ikid ? no no non no there is allready tkid (legend) that would be like rates or sevok caim rondi so better change it before you getting to use to it that tag needs alot of work so get your self a thin pen and will up 10 a4 pages with it after that do your tag make a pick post it and we will see
lasek - like the drips like a fiend loves crack. you should make it one drippy mess. rsakens - do you just have a wall somewhere close where you practice? i see the same things in a lot of your pics. rainy day, marker tags. been workin on my 'S' n 'R' n i think everything looks pretty good in the first one. [Broken External Image]:http://img391.imageshack.us/img391/2817/rainy2bo6.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img391.imageshack.us/img391/4295/rainy1zo2.jpg second one dont like that much.
rsakens - do you just have a wall somewhere close where you practice? i see the same things in a lot of your pics. yeah your right i use to get up on different spots before then i decided to practice on chill spots until i have a sick style so yeah most of them are done in the same empty factory
sanrtizer-thats dope. im loving it. oakster-i like the first one more, but the second one is pretty nice too.
You Guy got a New tag. I chage it around a Lil. I took out the Arrows. I have two dieffernt one I'll post them and I'll want to know which one i should use or which on better.
LECHE - Everything closer together. OAKSTR - Not feeling the giant cross on the T. Pretty good other than that. Steeze it up a lil and see what happens. KANR - The N looks like an M, but it's pretty hot other than that. Alright, I've been trying some different things with my tags. Tell me which # you like the best. Also, should I go with the lowercase or uppercase R? [Broken External Image]:http://img119.imageshack.us/img119/3172/1000790qc3.jpg
You know, I just realized this thread has a fatal flaw. If our toy tags are being critiqued by other toys, how the fuck are we gonna improve? How do we know that the person critiquing us is talented enough to know what they're talking about?
^^^ so true. lol Just read thro them and take to heart the crits of writters whos work you have seen and like or thought was skilled. Dont stress the toys they are most likly criting to get crits so just keep that in mind.
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KOBRA: Honestly, those are horrible. Just get rid of that style completely. Look at some other tags (not tags here in the toy section of course), compare their style to yours, since we're all toy here, bite if you have to, like that ESPO dude said, being a toy is great because you're pretty much allowed to bite other people's styles.
Man this is nerve wracking. Like I cant fucking tag at all. Or I have no sicnce of style which fucking sucks. But I can kind of do pieces. Like Throw ups and stuff. But I feel if I get my tag down I'll have it. Like what can i chage on it or how sould i right. It.