Now, now, no need to take the internet so seriously. And I don't even live close to Boulder, guess again. And Mexicans are afraid of the snow.
awright got my resize on, says avone blah blah blah uhh so yeah fucked up the drop shadow on the E crits or suggestions?
i see the amne in the first, but not axmne or amne in the others, where'd you see the x in the second one?
thye line goin throuh the A's leg makes an x... try seperating your letters (haha im totally not doing what i say but w/e) and try to make all the bars the same size and awoke does that say haste or maste (jw) and i cant really crit it cause its wicked blurry [Broken External Image]:http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/6860/sivlizednew001sd0.jpg crits? and i know ive got a shitty color selection... it looked better in my head haha and this is kinda funky/wierd but i had some time on my hands and wanted to do something different oh and the d got cut by the scanner
make each letter seperate. it makes it look better and easier to read. awoke, do some simple letters man, i can't read your piece maste, i have no idea what your first letter is. it looks decent, but get rid of the loopy things and make them more bar-ish. this any better from the first? i think it is. [Broken External Image]:http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/5830/reign1dl7.jpg
atlock, i like ur shiz chief, just think u should move away from doin so many seperate bar in a piece. try make single letters with the same style... get me?? tank i like that 2, tried cracks yet??
i tried cracks on another piece, but i didnt post it.. didn't come out as well as i liked. but it was better than the one you saw. i went overkill on the holes and cracks haha. my next sketch will have cracks for ya buddy
did this for a battle with aker says break [Broken External Image]:http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/picture208.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/picture209.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/picture210.jpg
awoke...thats pimp, maybe just settle it down a bit on the colours..or go even funkier. ghost, separate your letters, it looks like popsicle sticks laid together by a 3 year old. same thing goes for you maste, right simple idea, just need some separation from your letters Jetpacks got the right idea, nice and simple, just make sure your letters are the same width nocan, lost the arrow, nice grungy style though. and just to show yall bawk aint dead... a sketch for my boy 2time...says time...word, crits? keep sketchin [Broken External Image]:http://img395.imageshack.us/img395/4008/img017uv9.jpg
oh and Desipher thats pretty hype....maybe youre trying to do to much? i think i critted everyones work on like 3 pages back...or im just tripping..fuck it
its...not... the letters are clouded, the addons are misplaced and sloopy that ruin the flow of the piece.
Next time... I use a ruler... Its rough, its kinda lopsided but what ever. I'll take another swing at it tomorrow afternoon with a pencil and ruler. [Broken External Image]:http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/7972/geski7am9.jpg Tricks; Colour scheme is amazing, really pops well. Decipher; Your too hard on yourself, but I can see you going really far because of that. Jetpack; Love where that simple is going.