Hahahaha, I know your name, and where you live now Moes, I really like your M, like oh so very much, but your E keeps killin' the whole piece
capitol - only one i find good is the blue mosh piece Moes - i dig the M aint feelin the E maybe try droppin it lower and pushin it more to the right Atlok - i love that tag looks like its got a bit of arabian flair Armer - simples Irekn - dope simples View attachment 363228 crits?
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evasion - if thats a piece...the letter are too spaced out. the end - nice fills but i'd work on those e's [Broken External Image]:http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/8861/byulu0.jpg did this last week.
i got bored in class crits? [Broken External Image]:http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/7955/berstbinderki5.jpg
dude i think your shits usually pretty fresh but those colors look like puke to me like literally vomit....
My PSP only loaded half the flick Could only see the throw... Fors, I thought you were a lot better than that. Are you on drugs?
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Ahhhh! Stoppit! Or at least don't sketch for now, I almost lost respect for you, that's like 11 steps back
letter structure, letter structure, letter structure start on simples bro........ dont try 3D until youve mastered simples...i wouldnt even mess with fills yet
[Broken External Image]:http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/scan00032.jpg ^ Just some characs i've been fooling around with.
i actually think that forsaquen peice is decent...its real old school looking and Mark Bode-ish ha. nice. Xyk..boring and unoriginal..." dropping bombs " so played out..come up with something new..and try the char thread for starters. this is the 2nd time iv posted 2 flicks and not gotten comments ha. View attachment 363331 View attachment 363332 no fair.i give crits i want em back.
The lumos sketch is sick, like how you did the L as opposed to the other letters. The other sketch is just as good. I love how you always use so little space on the paper, making the piece stadn out even more. The dropping bombs thing up there was just something i wrote, ive seen it written tima and time again, and that really wasn't what i was looking for crits on. As for the characters, you said they seemed unoriginal. Could you elaborate, maybe link? cos i havent seen much anything that looks very similar to those.