dude atlok, you always make your Cs too small dude. make em bigger. try doing all your letters just about the same exact height. here's some chit from day before yesterday...
Thats dope as fuck bro, but i agree make the C a bit bigger. and i would make the I look less like a T and more like a I, but thats me. What brand pen did u use for that?
your first two are defined perfectly and spaced evenly, Your last two letter look a bit squished, and way less defining. would look good i it was consistantly one way. but having them both looks liek you got lazy towards the end. (lol maybe you did i dont know)
its a throwie dude. i dont think hes using bars... but uhm.. yeah, alo loose the black lines you did where it should like the litte "shine"? thingss... ok did it over.
alright cool ill try that next sketch, has my structure gotten better? ive been really trying to tone my letters down a lot
yeah. and specially since you stopped doing that style where youre just stacking your bars. lol next week maybe. i hope. i really want to.
View attachment 367114 i hate it but working on it and new name and style i can do wayyy better im just a pile at drawing right now just lazy but crits please
I really like this. The letters could use some overall development (comes with practicing a style) but I think there's serious potential there. sometime in the next week I'll go through and do one of my massive crit-posts, possibly post a couple sketches if I get my camera working.
Kill all the extensions, and don't make your S drop like that. I like that a lot more than your usual style.
What up, so unlike some I dont mind being here on the tot dock....critique all you want. What I really want to know is which style to stick with. some are old and would be hard to bring back, but im up for suggestions. Mom bought me a pencil crayon set for christmas that year used it once lol thanks mom. For the record I asked for a prisma set. [Broken External Image]:http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00062-copy.jpg Newest style, thought i was going to stick with it as i like it but you guys tell me what you think [Broken External Image]:http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00063-copy.jpg Borrowed my homies markers for a weekend out of 30 those were the only colours that still had ink. [Broken External Image]:http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00065-copy.jpg was thinking about writing vision, still am actually...I guess I just can't let go of visk, maybe once i develop my one true style I will switch it up between the two. [Broken External Image]:http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00066-copy.jpg Style before my newest one, i like this style but not this piece I have better letters for this style pics are further down. [Broken External Image]:http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00067-copy.jpg Square style definitely influenced by causr and nixon, before any of you start the whole bite debate oh yeah and the character is from the boondocks cartoon. Aaron Mcgruder style is soo sick. [Broken External Image]:http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00068-copy.jpg Some simple shit I wanted to turn into a stencil but never got around to it [Broken External Image]:http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00069-copy.jpg I always liked the concept of letters going up and down and at the edge of the wall...my first and best attempt at it. [Broken External Image]:http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00070-copy.jpg Kane influence no lies I loved his style like i loved my mothers milk as a baby, I already got madd hated on for this so no need to remind me of it [Broken External Image]:http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00071-copy.jpg Painted this and it looked way better, once I get all my pics off my other comp I will show you for your own comparisons. [Broken External Image]:http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00072-copy.jpg 2004 seems like it was just the other day [Broken External Image]:http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00073-copy.jpg Not sure where I got this style, I am kind of feeling it the more I look at it, meh let me know if it is growing on you guys like it is growing on me. [Broken External Image]:http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00075-copy.jpg So this is the style I am feeling the most....I came about this after watching that movie they sell in the store called the Future of Graffiti, pretty interesting stuff. My problem is i still to this day cannot put the letters together meh. [Broken External Image]:http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00076-copy.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00077-copy.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00078-copy.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://usera.imagecave.com/Viskoner/DSC00079-copy.jpg Sorry for the blotches stupid me was doing some handstyles in sharpies and didnt realize that sketch was underneath. Thats all folks...