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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. nvstyles

    nvstyles New Member

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    first post! but crit all you want...
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  2. La Coka Nostra

    La Coka Nostra Elite Member

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    cin, i think the heart idea is kinda sick
    or it could be if pulled off right.
    try scaling it down a bit.
     
  3. tempest

    tempest Senior Member

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    lol! i dont know y i bother......

    Anyway:
    Smile - basically wat every1 els is sayin: make the dot on the 'i' smaller, make the curve on the e smaller and make the exclamation smaller and smaller until it dissapears ;)
    cin-dude i luv the heart idea! thts sweet. not really feelin the other one tho. too drippy.
    avenger-ur first e looks like a k. and if u really want 2 keep the stars on their then try slantin it a little. i think the reason most ppl dont like it is cuz its out place with ur tag. ur tag is slanted so it kinda jumps out the wall. the star is really flat tho and seems out of place. idk
    spaz-nice. lose the superswirl on the z tho ;)
    wallace - awesome! the i is kinda feeling left out tho. y dint u giv him any style ;)
    awe -4 a first post, thats dope. idk wat those stupid circles r for tho. also, the way uve stroked that bar on the top with the e makes them look broken apart. try not lifting the marker off when u get to tht top bar. i dont even kno if u understand wat i just sed... Last crit! the two hatchmarks onthe top left...make it one, get rid of the one in the middle.

    EDIT:i just read tht nd it dont make sense
     
  4. Soboe!

    Soboe! Senior Member

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    your styles toy, now both of you stop it, your both bunk
     
  5. tempest

    tempest Senior Member

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  6. TronMzero

    TronMzero Senior Member

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    messed up a little bit, mad small area =P but yeah. thats the other A i have.

    crits? idk which A i should use...


    edit:
    I was thinking of doing that actually. lol. thanks though, don't mind this one, I'm gonna lose the superswirl.

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    Last edited: Apr 28, 2008
  7. MUSEone

    MUSEone Elite Member

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  8. TronMzero

    TronMzero Senior Member

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    ^hahaha.

    I racked 2 yesterday, and I got enough sharpies, and shit. =P

    I'll start using it. :D
     
  9. MUSEone

    MUSEone Elite Member

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    yea haha stop using w.e marker that is ur using and writing on wat looks to be a longboard in tha making.. haha
     
  10. TronMzero

    TronMzero Senior Member

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    hahaha, it was like a retarded ass mini surfboard shelf... thing.. i dont even know, but yeah I'll be using actual PAPER and a sharpie or pen.
     
  11. Wallace

    Wallace Elite Member

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  12. Bah Humbug

    Bah Humbug Senior Member

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  13. TronMzero

    TronMzero Senior Member

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    ^eh. Loose the little cross outs in the arrow and the swirl out of the letter N

    not bad though
     
  14. -Panik-

    -Panik- Senior Member

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    hahahahaha best, without a doubt
     
  15. Soboe!

    Soboe! Senior Member

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    thank you my dear panik,
    now i will post my old bunk ass tag
    Snot oner(i believe ive posted it before)
    [Broken External Image]:http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg102/CircaDrummer/20080313_6.jpg
    its very crowded, ill do a cleaner one sometime soon just not now cause my "work" *cough*graff area*cough* is full of plates, pop cans, chip bags, and cups
    until then... i leave you all with a simple crit, Dont add "add ons" onto LETTERS... that shit goes around the tag, the letters make the tag its self with its unique flow and shapping
     
  16. RezOner..

    RezOner.. Banned

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    soboe your easily the best on this forum. is that from 2003? im lovin it though, i like that squishy style haha
     
  17. -Panik-

    -Panik- Senior Member

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    Yea, for sure post a cleaner one, the add ons are good
    the letter structure needs work
    other than that it's pretty good, haha
    I can't wait to see the cleaner one :)
    EDIT: is the S sideways? aha
     
  18. boomboombox

    boomboombox Member

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    Wow 981 pages how do people make it this far..?
     
  19. -Panik-

    -Panik- Senior Member

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    if you look back, sadly most of it is pointless beef
     
  20. Cin123

    Cin123 Senior Member

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