yea son, the S is slightly crooked over it makes the flow MUCH faster, but no man there is alot of letter structure i will try to point it out haha ill post it again showing the letters
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Glyce -your forcing a oneline, thats something you never wanna do... your trying WAY to hard to connect the letter, dont connect your letters till you got DOPE hand steezes down. and then you talk to a writer who has a dope oneliner and he will show you the way to go. and that half heart shit isnt workin son... drop that part forsure
soboe would you mind helping me out with some crits? [Broken External Image]:http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/3426/imgsk0.jpg tear it up
lets see, for the "I" make it upper case... and on the top of the S have alittle leg up word like mine does (top of the page). that S your using was the first styled S i ever did when learnin graff... i love seein how bunk it is.... Fix the beginning of the tag because it doesnt look like a letter(s). and the C should progress its self from there
Not really feelin the e, it might be just me lol but did you do the one at the bottom of the pic too? anyways it's pretty nice, pretty simple, once you get a better hold of it start adding some steeze
yo whats good i write here and im in kbs and aoe im from kitchener ontario is there any way to make these flicks show up bigger?
the bottom one was just some experimental calligraphy shit i did. the reason the E goes a bit thin at the side is cos it was a brand new t-nib and it needs to be broken in...
Upload ur flicks on like tinypic or something here, and then copy paste the forum link into ur post, and mane i didn't think the thinness was your fault, but I just don't like the structure of the e, personal preference, i'd like to see more of your shit tho, you look to have potential