sen - that shits dope man yarbles - no flow, your letters just dont seem to fit they all got different styles, try to keep it consistent heres some Philly handstyles i been workin on, lemme know if ya dig em or not View attachment 368294 View attachment 368295 View attachment 368296 sorry the pics are so big, cant figure out how to get em smaller right now
Bump. There we go. It's a new page. Estas contento Sen? Syrup, like everyone else has been saying, throw everything away except the S and the Y. I'm talking about your one liner here. I don't like the Y in the second picture. Keep the S and the Y from the first pic. Saek, take the arrow off of the K. I don't like your S too much. Maybe because it sorta looks like mine. Or maybe because it just doesn't appeal to me. I'm not sure yet. Um, rework the A I guess? It seems sort of unbalanced/unlevel if that makes sense. And I guess I like the E. Crits please?
MELBOURNE OZTRALIA F1C SWB. hes in the ironlak writing team. if u can burn these joinups.. http://www.ironlak.com/writerteam/index.html
Syrup Trying to get better, i think all the practise is working. I did all these lame tags around it but the looked gay so i cut them out. Crits please
It's getting better Try to make it all the same size and make the p less edgy, more liek the r Try not to get your r into your u either makes it look kinda sloppy Also lose those two lines under itand the question mark
^^^im feelin that^...not typical but i think its mad dope..i would close up the D a little bit(i think its a d) them phillys would look bomb painted.
new tag easy to read. akoner [Broken External Image]:http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/11/akonerai0.jpg
its simple but it does seem like your writing akon-er (the rapper) if you pull it off its fine you just might get some stick
lol. i always kno its u cuz u take the pictures underwater . get ri of that thingie in ur o. and ur r is 2 pointy and flowless(tht a word?). the bottom part of it shuld b like the btm part of the k and not rotated up
Bump that Syrup tag. This thread is mostly disaster, which is okay. It's a place for learning the most essential, and a good place to get pointers, so if you're posting in here then props, even if you suck, but this one was very nice. ...damn I ramble a bit. sorry. Sen The First is fresh too. .