those "shines" make it look incredibly toy. other than that, i guess its okay. its not incredibly good, but also not incredibly bad.
the regime is just a random word.....but the leg on the C used to be on the top, should it go back to that?
jesus christ, done and done, I had a REALLY simple one and people told me to progress, I did, what the fuck its like go simple, check, now progress, I do, then you just stay start again, FUCKING A mate...
JersOne TIC: I'm really liking your throwie although you could probably do something with the J to match he other letters
Capo.. your throwie is not simple. It looks like you're trying too hard on adding style and throwing "cool" extra little things. Practice on Capo. Forget Regime. Just practice on Capo, start simple. And by simple i mean not with the little crown or with the bumps and stuff on the c and crap. Just do ur basic throwie and keep practicing it and getting the flow right and under control. Once u mastered that, THEN add small things. dont even practice shadowing or outlining yet, just Capo itself. Step-by-step Progression, my friend, is what gets you somewhere.