Ur style is dope but try working a bit on the M. maybe putting the bottom line Higher vertically or something And by any chance do u go to Cypress Creek?
[Broken External Image]:http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/4996/img0223ow3.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/4996/img0223ow3.da454d190f.jpg trying somthing new, dont like it too much myself crits please Soup- am i the only one that cat read this? is it SuPAa? either way , looks good
jesia- I like your name, but first, I don't think you should put X's as holes. the I doesn't look much like one to me and the J seems to need help especially. [Broken External Image]:http://img366.imageshack.us/img366/7672/gysevh2.th.png how wack is this? I did a really shitty job with the G.
Oh, my bad. I thought it kindof looked more like a T, but then I looked at the tag and the line in the A made me think it was a capital I. haha, that makes a lot more sense now. in the bomb you should also make the line between the to "legs" of the A come up higher, it will look better.
I just wrote regime for fun, but ahh shit I hate when you're not in a thread for a while, I meant I've already posted TONS of simples that were TOO simple as many people said, so I stepped forward, THAT throw wasn't a simple, bur a step in progression. You're just trying to back track me, I mean you have good ideas in mind, but I've done the simples and everyone said it was good, just TOO simple, so now I'm trying to progress. Which here ya go....
See that looks way better. Just keep working and practicing on that tille you get the flow under your 100% control. Then you can add shit to it or whatever. Either way, do w/e you want and wat fits your style I'm just givin my 2 cents
heres i quick one i worked on, critics welcome, im still fucking with it but thatz a blueprint of it [Broken External Image]:http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/nn193/GHOST_307/gtag.jpg