mane thats looking dope man but try and thickin up those lines man. cin feeling it alot def my fave by you try makeing the hole on the c a tad wider and if u go a bit slower with your can ur lines will be less misty and look cleaner faker i know that ur probly thinking that that piece is really dope cause trust iv pulled wacker shit than that outa my ass befor and thought i was some king but to keep it short just keep sketching in the book do simples (your can control isnt half bad tho) jers that shit is ill but im wondering do you ever sketch cause it seems like you rarly improve your shit. dont get me wrong tho im feeling it it just seems like you should be a whole lote better letter wize than u are. reign try useing a darker out line colour cause the colour skeem isnt that bad its just the green out line with the green force field that throughs it off. i thought this was the cleanest part to my piece any crits??
tezm- i really dig that, maybe bake the middle bars of the m wider, im really feelin the letters though. fresh faker- sketch alot more before u paint jers- ill, what kind of paint u using? kasr- clean as fuck reign- fix the 3d a little, but dope overall
tezm- i like the idea. just try and fade the colors a little softer instead of such a rough hard fade. but nice work
stock caps all day lol...last throwie is my old style but i think it has more flow (as far as bad toy flow goes)
the s and the o look good. the r and the e need a little work. also not feeling the random squiggly extensions much.
like it a shit load..the R just reminds me of a K with the line in the middle but its nice. how big is it?
Alien- work on simples, learn how to work 3d/drop shadows, learn how to work a forcefield to make it pop off the wall rather then a background... type thing. Tell your boy not to toss up crowns.
paint under bridges for now cause that really wak and im sure other writers in your area would be pissed to see that shit up on a spot like that
its not a crown its MBA. i have better things done (i think) i just dont have pics, i will soon. thanks for the advice though
[Broken External Image]:http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/1967/05062008081503pmts5.th.png here's a new one. I think/hope it's better. Alien- you may want to consider a new name: http://www.graffiti.org/eon75/01409_eon.jpg other than that, I think it's all been said- 3D and simples. and when you fill stuff in, go left to right(or the opposite w/e) or up and down. circles and "scribbling" to fill it if you know what I mean look shitty. actually, your N is good. perfectly simple with no extensions or bends. keep working.
that shit can be fixed. just throw a little more paint under the hole in the R. like a couple inches. it'll even it out.
gyse, 3 things. thats wack and ugly. you should post it in the blackbook thread. dont bother tellin him to change his name, cuz i doubt he will.
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Some old throws i forgot about View attachment 369875 did my fill and all i had was 2 whites... i thought one of them as black ahaha View attachment 369876