Atomik - fresh shit.
Jakeboy, im diggin it, letters and all. At least on Komp.
Fluffy - I like that throw.
And Cais - that I does look a lot better.

 

the p and fill is ill

 

kils - steeze simpls

cais, not bad , the s sucks tho, well the top of it atleast

some quick pen fresstle
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which one looks the least shitty, first or second?

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seyar, that looks nice, other than that A. Fix that, and it'll look way better.

 

the a and the r dont flow at all, make the right leg of the r as thick as the rest. and that A is not an a

 

stop trying to be serius,
not sayin gur biting

 

kils you should of used prismas or something, not wasteing good paint markers. still look tight thou

 

Shitty simp.

And no can control, whats it to you? He probably racked that shit anyway. No beef.

 

True, but just trying to help someone out... and idk how to crit yo stuff.... i dont' know how to do that kinda stuff. besides the three deee, pretty alrigt.

 

Being toy..



Trying some simpler stuff...

 

capo. work on your simples more kido

 

second one isnt terrible cap, and you're definitely progressing. But stick to dem straights

exchange with erem
the M is pretty haggard as far as structure goes. took me like an hour to figure out something that was decent

 

i think it looks original

 

capo, thats prolly the best ive seen from you. straight bars though, its lookin better, keep sketchin

cept, the fucks up with that M? haha. im not feelin that steeze at all homie, try again, i know you can do better.

some shit i doodled tonight, should i try an work with this shit?
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haha dunno man. i like that style, somethin youd see on freights, keep workin it.

 

meh, the styles pretty bitten but thanks though

 

bump, damn last page....