WORD! this is a tigght straight letta! if the K was at the same level of the R i think it might look a bit better
id say loose the highlights until you have less loopy letters, and if you keep the loops, try and keep them even thickness
kk, i punked a nice "A" from some piece on here and im changin' im grounded off the net for a week...cuz i skipped and went taggin. now all i have to do is sketch EDIT: fuck that im till up
yo forreall, you shoudnt be callin anyone a toy. your shit aint hot. it's clean, thats about it. lol@urarrows
well i didn't actually mean canvas literally, by that I meant find a chill wall or get a bigger piece of wood
here's the day flick. i always think it looks better in day. missed some of the fill and the forcefield on the inside. [Broken External Image]:http://img396.imageshack.us/img396/4336/rasek1bs2.jpg
work on the way u fill the letters go from left 2 right not left right up down and any overway u can go and simplify the t
no i fucked that A up. but i like how its pushed up more than the R and S, ive sketched better. but i rushed it cuz someone was watching me in the bushes. but wouldnt approach me.
Im glad u think ur a badass cause u can switch my words when u quote me. Look its not that hard. Heres my crits on ur shit. To many arrows, gay ass fills and dont make tha leg on tha e so big. Next time u call out somone by saying theyre a "mad toy" and have a whack style, make sure ur shit is acutally good.
bump, thanks for the crits i got. solar, the forcefield is the last line you put around just the outline of your piece. if you look at mine, the white line thats on the outside of my black outline. would be my forcefield. y'hurdd? krum, a pound on that billboard hit. im not feelin the steeze. but keep it up
jet, the only thing i could say in make the A the same size and kinda straighten it up, but that's a fucking cleaaannn simple. first shit i've painted in a whiiiiile. on the 2nd, i could barely see the fill on the wall it was so dark, hence the fucked up misaligned lines and the random unfilled spot in the M. also, the S is gay. other than that, crits? View attachment 372250 View attachment 372251
its really sloppy. try and style the o and s more like the m and e and the hole in the e is bad too. over all its not that bad.
yea, it was really late and i did it mad quick, like 20 minutes. once i get a good chill spot locked down, i'll get some cleaner stuff in here, because that 2nd one is obviously craaazy sloppy.