those letters are nice but you should curve the s more to match the o and a

 

that looks a lot better than your other shit. watch your lines, there bumpy. keep it smooth, and when your making the bar wide to thin, do it at a slight rate. nothing too crazy like what you have going. i dont like the S though, dont overlap the letter with itself. and the middle bar on your A, line it up with the bump on the outside of the letter. straighten the A a bit, and push the S and O to the right a bit. make it flow a bit more

 

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to much talk

 

poor cais
haha k dude lets see... what needs work
the C and the S are lackin abit and the A doesnt flow with this style of piece

P.S ...♥

 

bump

 

okaer, your o's are bunk homie lol
tags are way to hard to start with o's

 

haha i know i like the name so im gonna keep workin on em

 

New Name, new sketch

Here is one of my better ones.......sorry i had to take it wit a camera sucky ass quality

i know i suck......please no shit, just advice

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once again:
-atlock, i love your stuff/style alot (especially color) the only thing id say is the curly of a looks a bit out of place.
-:/ haze good...how should i pronounce that...
- okae nice, personally i'm down with that "o" but i dont know shit
- white....what way should i go? advice: probably the typical "simplify and work on structure"

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Hopefully i get a smiget of crit this time.

HOW WOULD U LIKE TO SEE MY PENCILED ONE FINISHED?

 

to many arrows? just tryin to throw in some flare

 

go to the new to graff thread

 

dont throw in flair yur not good enough


loos aaaaaaalll of the arrows


look at the new to graffiti thread in the stikies itl explain everything ther

 

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Should of made the B same size as the rest, but tell me what you think

 

you should make your letters more defined, i have no idea what that says

 

no he needs to go to the new to graff thread.

 

brink what does that say start of with BLOCK letters

 

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brink=i can't tell what letter those are
white=wow, no arrows

 

brink, it's really hard to tell those are even letters, sorry
bizar, you've got some pretty decent letters, but the 3D is off and i'm really not a fan of the spade thing on the I's.

bumping these, which one are you feelin the most?

 

oh mai gawd, that top throw is beautiful.