right on, my bad. the eyes throw it all off, its almost too cartoonish to be with the rest of it and the whole unequal nostrals, the ears, the forehead, the cheek bone.... idk, its just almost a 8th grader drawing. idk how to elaberate, i can say the anatomey is off, and what not, just wierd, idk, HAHAHAH, this is why i can't elaberate, cept for lettors. elect- the e looks crammed, even though you drew it first, it almost looks as if you drew the last letter first..... jetpak,- i like the simps, the flow of the top two halfs of the k is effed, or maybe just the whole k idk, i really dk but i just know something is wrong with it. the e is dope, the right leg of the r is too big, or the left leg is too small. haha, i drew a dope e but the color kills the piece so i'm never gonna post it, just draw the e again...
dope K........................... second "bar" piece.nawt. shoulda took more time on the last 2 letters rushed it a little. critz....
zen-simples and bars..... fonone-im liking the throw sep for the c and the bottom hand style ispretty dope sharpie bordem at 3am WOOT WOOT!
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[Broken External Image]:http://www.tinypic.ws/files/ljy7q9kyqqqcqgkw0bbn.jpg workin on a 2 letter... Doap- Love your simples...not a bad throw either... Keane- stuff looks good... but try mixing it up abit... all your stuff looks the same...
Resin im lovin that, but make the "R" a little straiter. Also, make the "S" a little more domanent...if thats the look your going for
ate, work on your shadows and don't forget to use bars (on the right side of your A) and yes, go simple resin, i don't like the bend in your R the rest is pretty ok
Man, you make them trains? or what. if not hook me up with a link Also, Thats a dope "R" and try not attaching letters
ate-simples and bars.... chump-i wouldnt write sh its a pretty played out name plus theres already an acomplished frieght writer that goes by sh,aside from that its looking fresh haha amka-thats too dope man rsakens-im really feeling that bottom painted one as for setches the crom eone and the on under it look the best second atampt at an apher throw ignore the wack ass !