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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. squidone

    squidone Senior Member

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  2. La Coka Nostra

    La Coka Nostra Elite Member

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    evade, that kinda looks like an acroe bite to me...
     
  3. *cept*

    *cept* Senior Member

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    thats an understatement
     
  4. mosezone

    mosezone Senior Member

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    yea word, and also i wouldn't write your name on it if you're turning it in for school. it's tight, but it just might be a big bite. and RAZE, first one's got potential: maybe make the letters all even like in the 2nd one and just keep messing around with it.

    some sketch from after i was done with finals. crits?
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  5. Soboe!

    Soboe! Senior Member

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    you all gotta chill with these biting crits...
    its been going on for fuckin 100 pages, just if you see a bite keep it to yourselves and shut up and draw!
     
  6. Scream Out

    Scream Out Senior Member

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    evade- im not even sure how to crit you on that, im going to assume your going for realism... and failing at it.. look at some more pictures of fetuses or something? mainly the picture is just lacking in detail, and you definitely went overkill with the tubes.

    raze - keep at it dude, i think it would help if you drew your bars all the same size until you have a better feel fore the letters and then start playing with the proportions


    new sketch, fucked up the drop shadow like the dead hooker in my basem.. i mean...

    ai91.photobucket.com_albums_k301_Inhumation_Photo266.jpg
     
  7. Soboe!

    Soboe! Senior Member

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    impale whe should paint sometime. pm me
     
  8. Aspyr510

    Aspyr510 Member

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    Really messy. Clean it up some, but it could be really good.
     
  9. Bets369R

    Bets369R Elite Member

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    Evade: i wouldnt put what you write on your school work..but thats just me...i like it otherwise

    Raze: you need to work on your letter consistency. your bar thickness is way inconsistent

    Mose: lose the extensions, and your M looks weird to me. it doesnt flow with the rest

    Impale: Everything is technically right on it as far as letter structure and stuff..but i just dont like it very much for some reason..cnt really explain why though
     
  10. Heilex

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  11. Panda Jerk

    Panda Jerk Elite Member

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    ugly
    just work on your letter structure and gooo wayyy simpler
     
  12. Evasion Of Invasion

    Evasion Of Invasion Senior Member

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  13. Bets369R

    Bets369R Elite Member

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    true that. needs moar arrows!!
     
  14. Panda Jerk

    Panda Jerk Elite Member

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    like 89 mor at least that will make it true hip hop steeez
     
  15. Soboe!

    Soboe! Senior Member

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    yea double up on the arrows kid,
     
  16. sir.one

    sir.one Moderator

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  17. IlikePie

    IlikePie Elite Member

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    The fuck are you talking about?
     
  18. Edward"Sezer"Hands

    Edward"Sezer"Hands Elite Member

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    thank you sir.
    when ya'll were new i sure in the hell didn't piss on your parade point the kid in the right direction the new 2 graff thread or tell him to work on simple keyboard letters.
    toy section use to be alot of help, now it's toys with inflated egos trying to advance too fast.:rolleyes:
     
  19. IlikePie

    IlikePie Elite Member

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    I just wanted to be in on the "in" crowd :(
     
  20. AOTPs

    AOTPs Senior Member

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    its the truth