evade thats pretty sweet but you should definitely add more detail redoing some earlier stuff [Broken External Image]:http://img391.imageshack.us/img391/6364/dsc00325hj1.jpg crits please
yea word, and also i wouldn't write your name on it if you're turning it in for school. it's tight, but it just might be a big bite. and RAZE, first one's got potential: maybe make the letters all even like in the 2nd one and just keep messing around with it. some sketch from after i was done with finals. crits? View attachment 374284
you all gotta chill with these biting crits... its been going on for fuckin 100 pages, just if you see a bite keep it to yourselves and shut up and draw!
evade- im not even sure how to crit you on that, im going to assume your going for realism... and failing at it.. look at some more pictures of fetuses or something? mainly the picture is just lacking in detail, and you definitely went overkill with the tubes. raze - keep at it dude, i think it would help if you drew your bars all the same size until you have a better feel fore the letters and then start playing with the proportions new sketch, fucked up the drop shadow like the dead hooker in my basem.. i mean...
Evade: i wouldnt put what you write on your school work..but thats just me...i like it otherwise Raze: you need to work on your letter consistency. your bar thickness is way inconsistent Mose: lose the extensions, and your M looks weird to me. it doesnt flow with the rest Impale: Everything is technically right on it as far as letter structure and stuff..but i just dont like it very much for some reason..cnt really explain why though
Ummm hi... I'm new to these forums, so hi. [Broken External Image]:http://photos-h.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-sf2p/v232/76/17/549035862/n549035862_828311_4363.jpg
thank you sir. when ya'll were new i sure in the hell didn't piss on your parade point the kid in the right direction the new 2 graff thread or tell him to work on simple keyboard letters. toy section use to be alot of help, now it's toys with inflated egos trying to advance too fast.