Only thing you forgot was the I being all zigzaggy though. View attachment 375358 Also want to add with this design i thought (just an idea) the main I in the top could be see through so you could see how much ink was left in the bottles.
i didnt bother in reading this entire thread but an idea for your whole lable thing is use all the good ones make a variety of lables like collect them all type of thing cuz alot of those are dope-ness
Yeah i know that they are at the moment.But also you can have white bottles with parts that are see through. Or even if they change one time down the track to totally clear coloured bottles...It's just an idea to keep in mind.
out of anything iv seen in here these are the ideas that actually look like labels that would fit onto a mop perfectly...theyre so dope and professional
maybe the crown from the third one in the middle of the second one replacing the little zigzag, those are crazy
This one reminds me of the St. Ides I more than anything...guess cause you made the I longer. And your first design reminds me of mine pretty much. Mass- Cheers man!
yeah thats why i added the crown to make to make the logo different. wasn't tryin to jock yours man, i wasn't thinkin bout yours when i made that one. if i replaced the zigzag with the crown on the second one then the logo wouldn't be in there at all...
[Broken External Image]:http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/2015/illadel6ar7.png i thought of a new idea...let me know what you peeps think
Find someone who's into advertising, ask what he thinks. You aren't looking for the best opinion of a graffiti artist but someone who's going to be investing ALOT of money into your shit, they want something professional looking, not a "dope handstyle"
That's a good point..Then I guess I'll let it known my day job is a graphic/multimedia designer...So I've been trained in what's appealing to the eye and what's not.