when i said its a simple sketch i meant its juss like a rough piece thaa i coulda made better if i took tha time, cuz samp1e thinks i needa "get my letters straight" ... i dont mean simple as in tha WHOLE piece in general anyways.. thaa rasek piece flows mad smooth
ok i'll be a dick so i can come across more clearly i'm not gonna give you color ideas cause its a waste of good ink on such shitty letters. in other words: get your letters straight, do simples. EDIT: if you can make something better, then take the time to make it better cause nobody wants to see your rough work. emel -- looks pretty good, almost heat ! main issue is the lower half of your S, it just kinda dies off. don't have the A kick out so far so you can give the S a nice, solid and heavy lower. nitpick but might look better to have the upper right bar of the R insert on the lower right leg's origin. (yeah i am using anatomy terms!)
jetpack- take your own advice and read the new to graff thread.... fame- use bars to make simples for now.. and keep them the same width throughout the piece Science802- go simpler Kasper- i like that handstylle!! but the ltters need work..but dont try to add any small doodads and just work on a whole peice and try to keep a flow, you sorta did this but in all the wrong places?dno how to explain it just keep but go a little simpler
jetpack i love your style really sick paint that shit somewhere! emel thats lookin like its gunna be pretty nasty ink that shit
bump emel- besides coverin the s too much thats dope. diggin the handy as well rasek- move the A out from the R a little, im not feelin the extension on the r either
[Broken External Image]:http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/2704/lef1fc319248f5ea6bfe466tq1.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/2704/lef1fc319248f5ea6bfe466tq1.a43ba99fad.jpg elidelph, crits please seywhat- the r on the second piece, the leg of it looks like it comes to far out, i'de either bring it in a bit or bring out the bottom part of the s to get it to be more symetrical emel- the squigley part that connects the s to r doesn't seem to fit with the rest of the letters, but without something there at all theres kinda a gap between the two, looks like a dope style though jetpack- the way the leg of your R overlaps the the A looks funny, and theres a word for i just can't think of it, where two lines run across the same path, and your k's crooked, i don't like the leg coming off it to much either, just keep tweaking your letters and shit will come together more
Squider - It starts off good the first two letters are ok, andafterthatitgoes downhill, you should losethe little addons aswell they drag theletters down. Seyar-Fresh simples. Rasek- I like it, i dontlike the bend on the First leg of the R tho if you got rid of that it would be fire. kasr- looks alright, i wanna see it inked tho.
Jetpark - dont like the extension on the left of the R, and i dont like how the holes in between the letters and in the A etc arent shadow, looks like a radiator or something. squider - the first E is the only letter i like really, rest look goofy. seyar - fresh simps as always emel - the S is covered up too much by the A [Broken External Image]:http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/6135/may29172zr9.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/6135/may29172zr9.fa74ddcf22.jpg getting my I on. thought id post up a pic now and one when its finished.
ropes battle [Broken External Image]:http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00146-1.jpg?t=1212072159 [Broken External Image]:http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00149.jpg?t=1212073811
why ? its my best letter so far and by the way who dit this and the one from cais ? [Broken External Image]:http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg102/CircaDrummer/saroeonersof9.jpg
cais did them my hand style dont look like that. they look like this [Broken External Image]:http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg102/CircaDrummer/SaroeFSdigihandsteez.jpg see different and for your letter, you cant always use the same structure. just like bend the bars and what not lol experiment
experiment mhm i will give it a try by the way dit we ever exchange ? if not let me know if your interested
keane, your S kinna looks like an R, i can see it. but the angle and extension disguise it. and your R dosent flow with the rest of the piece. hopefully this is better than the last sketch. [Broken External Image]:http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/1476/rasek9kl8.jpg
alright man i will try what is bunk and rasek i find that sketch alot creative for a simple letter black & withe sketch only that extension on the right bar of the R looks weird the rest of the letters are dope
rasek thats looking dope man, only thing i would change is the the little bit on the right leg of your R because it covers too much of your A heres a sketch i did yesterday, ive been playing around with some different styles the past day or so the M needs some working and i need some new markers haha