Esco thats clean but it could use a little more. Its pretty plain keep up the work though. This is one pieces i just did and feel its worthly enough to be posted. Any Critz? [Broken External Image]:http://img104.imageshack.us/img104/1884/graffiti1revz6.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/3407/graffiti2reza4.jpg
Your outline looks clean, but I wouldn't attempt the highlights just yet, they have to look just right to work.
Quick bomb..... Any crits? [Broken External Image]:http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c89/Djskilz/atthebeach.jpg
[Broken External Image]:http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/scan0001.jpg I had a lot to said about this. I think it okay, but if you look in any of my past post you can tell I stepped my game up. Yea I fucked up on the B it look like a Bananna.
yeah and when i said "looks like fezats R" i dont know how it came across but it was meant to be more of "reminds me of fezats work" than "YOU BIT FEZATS R FUCKYOU". haha. anyways, peace
Crits would be appreciated [Broken External Image]:http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x62/crowdedtomb/Photo-0079.jpg
Work on a smoother fill and making all the letters proportionate. The letters are getting bigger from left to right, make them all the same size. Other than that, dope letters.
Stick to simps for now. Don't distract yourself trying to do highlights and fades in the fill. Focus on can control. Make sure your letters are tight when your getting up in your book and when you bomb pay special attention to spraying with a flow instead of focusing too much on making lines straight and shit. Make sure that where bars in a letter come together that come together at a point and are not squared off like in the M. Also make sure that all your points/corners are the same. Some of the corners on the letters are round while others are sharp. The E needs more flair and you need to work on that T. Make sure you distinguish each letter in the 3D so thats it's not one big 3D fill.
My crit is take is take it to the tot BB section. This thread is for Paint only kiddies. And now, since this shits been lackin for awhile...some olddd ish. View attachment ai10.photobucket.com_albums_a103_DeciMatioN_Crazegood.jpg