[Broken External Image]:http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/KobraTag1-1.jpg I know I need improvement. But what could I chage about the way my tag looks. Crits?
hmm... I'm really liking the 2nd one for some reason, I think it's because the "K" is more toned down. It sort of looks like an E in the other ones. Here's something I just did lol, crits plz: [Broken External Image]:http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/1876/resen3gi3.jpg
not to be rude or anything but you rEALLY need work.. that looks WAY too gang-like lose all the extra stuf.. lines, crown, dots, etc. and i cant even read it to be able to help you.. viruz-some of your Ks look like "lE".. make it more "K" like
dont put that little crown symbol, the bottom few look good, the top two not so good, looks clean, 7th one down looks the best, practice to do it like that every time
kobra- keep it simple vame- 1st and 6th ones are the best View attachment 376609 i think i made the p smaller idk. crits?
vame it's looking alot better I just still think you could do more with the m and on the one liner dont have that bump before the m
heres another idea for my tag, a bit simpler than befor, crits please [Broken External Image]:http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/7576/kayohaloqy0.jpg
smile- cut the silly arrow on the end of the E kayo- looks good but cut just a lil bit off the loop of the A to make it look a lil simpler.. other than that.. tighttt
ribbon SA? vame- you're definitely improving, keep practicing Queezy - your z looks like shit, literal shit