crits: bets, your character is a little sketchy..... but just clean up lines and it should be good. i always crit even when i don't have a flick... so yea that makes up for the no crits. AND there is only one black book that i can see on this page cuz i used the quick reply. RAWR. r is fucked on the three dee of course, it was a freestyle with no pencils..... so thats my excussseeeeeeeeeee. cits tho...
word, your M has a piercing... you just got jacked homie. nah, i kid. but yo, nice idea. that steeze is better than your battle piece.
really good mars the only thing that bugs me is on the first one where your M overlaps itself but really good
Mars- The charak isnt mine, i seen it in a magazine and thought it was dope so i cut it out and glued it in my book kinda just for inspiration later on. I like your M on the first one, im not feeling the S though..it just has no style compared to the rest of the letters. second one, lose all the little add ons behind the A kean, i like your letters, put a force field around your piece and i think itll tie together better
hahah, can't you read the name. lol. but the peirceing is because thats my chicks nick name. its for her year book and she has pierceings on her FACE just like in the pic.
dude its your guys battle you 2 set it up and make deadlines. Once you get the entries post it and a mod will approve it. Its not rocket science.
your stuff kinda reminds me of my old MAR sketches... not a bite. just reminded me of the good ol' days.