what does the top one say?

omssll?

 

Misyl
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task your k is weeeaaak

 

Me and SORT are homies.

 

bump

 

you could do the lowest bar of your E underneath the V, just like in the tag, and the A is in a different style than the V

 

evasion +misyl dope stuff
some simples
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T-REX for a battle.

Pureemotion the min and up simples look good!work on the B and on the K lower the top kicker bar.

 

very sick invasion
the finished one
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for my battle with drop[Broken External Image]:http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/5152/l018py0.jpg
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lol i thought it was a handy battle, mine.

 

Slaughter?

 

king new to graff it up, and if you already have....do it again. bars bars bars, no random soft arrows and clean up your lines

rsakens, uni paints are the balls did you use the yellow one on the E and A? they look more orange

 

i've been trying the more rounded style, ive got some more but they dont show up in pencil so i'll ink them then post 'em
fucked the o




keane- the second one is nice, but on the first one i don't think the e goes and i think the extension on the last e should be like the one on the k to balance it
raby- i always love your stuff, but im not too keen on this one, don't know why, the x is round and everything else is blockier is the only thing i can think of
pure- keep plugging with those simples, don't make the b go inside it self and make sure the bars line up on it, also, keep experimenting with the k
evasion- is the top of the v supposed to be twisted? If not the 3d is off, apart from that i think it looks really good, i especially like the effect you got from wiping the pen while it was wet
misyl- i like you flowy style, your i seems a bit plain compared to your other letters, connect the middle bar of your s, the left of your y makes it look like an s and your l could be confused for a t because of how it crosses itself, your throwie seems good just square the top of your e so that it flows
bets- your d is too slanted, it looks alot like an a, if it is going to be that slanted try to make it less like an a, the top right of your s seems a bit too thin aswell
king?- hit the new to graff thread because clearly you are new to graff, poze isn't really that good but he will kill you toke will win though even though his isnt a piece
toke- toke for the win, you're gonna win a piece battle with a handy

 

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pic quality sux but just a simp for tha battle so who won lol?

 

word. i know that exact style your goin for, cept its hard for me cause i got an M, i would say just make the whole in the O less ovalish. but it definitely looks good

 

Pocs; nice shit. keep goin with it.
Notyou; i already told you you failed.
Ces; decent. make the c a bit skinnier.
Sandstorm; x.x. Eyesore. get some structure.

4 minute sketch in summer school

 

that O as is, is begging to be made into a face. lol

edit: gore I like that one better then the 1st one you posted just needs to be cleaned up abit.

 

^^
you talkin to me