zeta- work on not making your letters overlap each other alot, other than that it look alright. task- that simple looks dope, keep up the work. bets- dope styles, and that brown one liner looks cool too.
BETS THAT BOOK IS BALLIN! no matter how hard i try, i can never make my book look decent. thats why it doesnt get posted, i have crap in between everything good and it looks garbage... Please lets start shit with TASK unless we got mad proofs. Dont go beef startin and what not cause im tired of that stuff. BTW IM LOVIN THE TASK OF WHICH WE SPEAK! ILL! i might go buy more blue paint now... lol. no i already have enough..
- six oh 3 graff- Try to get a better letter structure, try to keep it simple. - Task One- Very nice simple, try to stick your letters closer together and look try some different styles. - Bets- Very clean shit man, I'd try sticking your letters closer together though. That fish is dope xD ------------------------------- Here's my sketch, it looks a bit weird where the letters join because I haven't erased some lines. Could I get some crits? [Broken External Image]:http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e38/brunorod/DSC00006.jpg
Seriously... every time i see you post a picture and someone negativly crits you you begin to whine....look....your doing simples...simple need to be straight...equal bar sizes ( widths , length ) ... and definatly no fills...simples are about rocking straight dope letters...without adding stupid fills...and im sorry to say...but you aint got any of them on lock.....read the " New 2 Graff " thread...learn to use bars properly...and please...draw a whole 15 pages of S's...cos yours " suck "....or in my words...wank and please for the sake of this thread...dont reply to every negative comment...cos to be honest..nobody gives a fuck. Bets..nawt bad...liking teh brown bottom one...the char is nice too Drakulaaaa my Raby Baby..you know i love you babe.
You already said it erase the lines. but also try to make it all 3d. its 3d or its not, a mix doesnt work. or maybe its just not eresed yet, some work on the s, but other than that, just continue to practice. remember practice practice practice practice practice. oh! and not just practice, perfect practice. Perfect Practice makes Perfection, nothing else does.
take your own advice, homie. simpler, keep your bar widths either the same or similar and you, just need the shut the fuck up. you even know what simples are? or you just regurgitating what others say. those are simples, they just arn't the best. it's still a lot better than your wack shit. faggot. zeta dont push your letters so close, space them out a lil bit. im talkin the T and A in particular. i do the same shit on my A's, you'll get it. just keep sketchin to get your lines crisper. raby, how you pronounce your name? ray-be or rha-be?
jetpack your a lil faggot blow me i dont understand how you feel cool by talkin over the computer u must tell all your cool friends and my shit i paint is simple i just dont post painted shit cuz im smarter then that hoe
dont get all butt hurt, its the truth kid. your shits wack, your too cocky. i dont feel cool by speakin real talk, it needed to be said. if you were standing in front of my face, i'd tell you straight, and laugh as i say it. but the only interaction i can get with you.. is over the computer. get a grip on yourself, fuck
lol ok i need banning cuz this kid talks shit and youve never seen anything ive painted nd you say my shits wack nice i got writers who are 10 times better then you helping me with my shit so what do u think u sayin that to me mean?!?! nathinnnnnn
i cant take credit for the charak. its cut from a magazine. i put alot of cool looking mag clippings and shit in my book for inspiration later on
Damn.... NVM, just clam down. Vandal. I going to tell you what mass told me...... YOUR TOY!!! GET OVER IT. Accept the fact that these pplz. Give Hard Crits. DAmn, which is a good thing by the way cause it helps you improve. Like they said just use Bars. Start simple. Thats all. Mass see my booboo thorwie lol.
they may be 10 times better than me. but your 100 times worse than i am. get off my tip. i may not have seen your painted shit, but ive seen your sketches. if your sketches are wack, you think your painted shits gonna look any better?? if you got that butthurt an took it personally, settle it with a paint battle. otherwise, shut the fuck up. kthnxbye, no more beef tonight.