crits before i sketch it again? gonna straighten the A and make the S flow more.. that first painted pear shit is pretty nice
didnt bother filling this in cause im trying to get down letter structer and shit. crits? amro1- that A looks pritty decent but that M's kind of fucked and the X could use a little work rasek- that looks real nice and clean man
like the R jetpack. [Broken External Image]:http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/7572/1000763qh4.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img118.imageshack.us/img118/3079/1000764pe7.jpg
task sil work...and i see u made ur 1 better good choise ...but i really dont like that t u make it like and r dunno why try making somethin new maybe? rasek dope shit im really fillin this man but the k is umm...dunnow somehow not connected to the style or somethin -_- or its just me gupe...nice improvin alot more better it flows alot better....but dude ur e isnt so good...make the bars bigger... glyce... im really likkin this man...keep sketchin more on structure...
Dewster, nice stuff, i like the whole capitol e on the second one thing, SWITCHIN IT UP! And yea doblina, why are you posting that in the toy blackbooks? Move on up to the big boy paint section. cause that stuff is dope! and who tagged this "toys with pencils"? way to go bud you sumed us right up. really you did.
which one is better? and is their anything i can put into the other to get an all round better piece? i prefer the s in the first one, so i'll try to incorporate it next time in the second gupe- i only like your g, dont seperate the top of your p, do a normal lower case u ( without bends) and just think of a new e, that one is really quite bad soank- round the top of the s, it looks like a 5, take off the extension on the bottom of the s and make that bar taper and take that bit on the top of the o off it makes it look like a 6 amro- bars, bars, bars rasek- take the bit off the bottom of the a and even the r out by putting that thing on the bottom of the r onto the bottom of the k aswell pear- i'm lovin that first sketch
which one is better? and is their anything i can but into the other to get an all round better piece? bump
i'd go for the second one experimenting new styles,even if its not my best,just to change a bit View attachment 378945 View attachment 378946
^^ Yeah no shit ^^ Over tha last few months that style has began to plague BS...Shit..i used to do it........ View attachment 378995 View attachment 378996 View attachment 378997 View attachment 378998 View attachment 378999 Lol fuck yahhh it has to be the most boring style to do ... period. sorry for teh shittynessism