Crits on this? Ill add 3D later.

Jupsick- I dont like how you set it out, if you wrote bomb mind accross the bottom of the page then Id like it. Just me though. I like the last pic best.

DonaldFour- work on the N and E.

 

nah bro, its just all connected and i did it quick..ill do a better piece when i have time.

 

my girl haze.....
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Don't you try to help her at all?

 

yo son jetpack step ya game up all ur pst are the sameshyt change ur letters u shud alredy be able to develop a style by now all i see from u is the same keybord letters wit extensions do diff styles even my pieces look decent n im ass kumpared to sum writers

 

no your sketches do not look decent, jetpack>you

 

haha shes got the same name as the dude from bombt the system, real original.

 

Drop...just shut your mouth. Why don't you step your game up and fucking post some flicks, instead of sitting back and trying to tell someone way better than you how to rock shit.

Anyway...heres some sloppy shit for everyone to enjoy.

 

pen freestyle,new style type shit ima try fuckign with

reb-try over lapping your letters bro
lime-i hope she puts out....cause she cant sketch worth a shit
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clout-try rocking one with the e's and z from the top one and the a from the bottom one

 

hey fellaz, fuck havent posted in here for along time
shit sketch i rocked in 20 mins.

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shut the fuck up.

 

ooh ooooohhh i wanna crit that.

take the bottom things off the A, those water drop things ya know, and dont let the one on the S go past the actual S like it does. just stop it where the right bar stops, on the S. let your E play in the big leagues like all the other letters, he's slackin. the T's dope. try a more legible extension on the left side of the A. its got potential.

 

There ya go Nutty.

 

Soboe.. there are aspects of that piece which i really like, keep it up.

I feel like I'm in a graffiti funk right now.. just can't seem to rock anything I'm really feeling.


Exchange with Kabre
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Freestyle
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Zof Is Black

 

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I like that top anom style dude, thats pretty dope

 

i like this style better XD
but make the right O bar alittle more big..
to drop...i know im duinn the same style...i dont have any fuckong new ideas -_-

 

really?
cause now that i look at it
i hate it