made the top one would look dope if u curved all ur bars in he same direction, and had round ends on the bars, ont he second one make sure if all the extensions are in one direction dont have one killing the flow
maybe i was too harsh but everyone knows thats just how i roll don't be a pussie im not going to beat you up
lol umm its just i was fixing some stuff about this other character and then people were attacking me then i thought it was dropped then it got brought back up then i just flipped out.
some randoms i done ..coloring is poor. says welco and col [Broken External Image]:http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/4085/welcodd3.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img164.imageshack.us/img164/3258/colisiole5.jpg nice detail on the gun mass, il find some of my gun drawings and post them
puree i love the consistencey of of ur style on the top one, you made every letter fitexcept the w it would look better if u shortened the midle and right bar to the same height as everything else
i been goon for a vile =/ there for i have lots of new stuff to show now =] check it out guys [Broken External Image]:http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00214.jpg?t=1213904072 [Broken External Image]:http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00257.jpg?t=1213893616 [Broken External Image]:http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/Picture003.jpg?t=1213893466 [Broken External Image]:http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00124-1.jpg?t=1213904279 [Broken External Image]:http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00196.jpg?t=1213904315
[Broken External Image]:http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00253.jpg?t=1213904352 i post more later
[Broken External Image]:http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00253.jpg?t=1213904352 i post more later
awsome shit man...jsut awsome.. [Broken External Image]:http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/7900/1906082329dq4.jpg any crits.????
try not being so blocky anymore. try being a little more free with the space you have to. on a regular sheet of paer i can bearly fit 3 letters...
View attachment 381177 tryin new shit sketch- solid simp, i dont like how the letters bob though. characs not too bad either ep3- listen to baze, and dont worry about coloring shit just yet. work on ur letters more keane- terrific posts, always diggin ur shit. the one posted by its self is my fav, woulda been dope with four diff styles of e's one the end, like the k's aima- fresh ass fills,
There ya go Seyar! I just dont like the S too much. Diggin the Y for sure though. And Keane that NAPSE? piece is fuckin dope. Like Mass said, thats the best thing i've seen from you.
[Broken External Image]:http://img107.imageshack.us/img107/5082/agro1et2.jpg ok so i just started to write again and this is my first post. i know i messed this one up alot so I just would like some criticism. I messed up on the g because i didnt do the lines inside of it. I used sharpies and on the red one i split the nib as i learned you could do today.. Other than that please tell me what I can do to improve. I also used bars and tried simples.
First off...Chill on the flick size man. Secondly I thought it was AERO when I first looked at it. Keep your bars proportionate to the piece as a whole. And that checkerboard 3D... im just not feelin it dude. Keep sketching man.