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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Mass Appeal

    Mass Appeal Banned

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    Drop..havent you got the message yet ?...read the tags...gtfo.
    I dont know if ill be colouring them..they take up far too much ink.
     
  2. Fize

    Fize Member

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  3. iGraffix

    iGraffix New Member

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    i just started writing a little less than a month ago
    i have a few pics of some stuff in my book but was wondering if u guys had any tips. remember im new, so take it ez
     

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  4. Mass Appeal

    Mass Appeal Banned

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    the middle one is a good start
    two 20 pages of those , no colour.
     
  5. Fize

    Fize Member

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    Bump for crits

    Zkatz: I say do more simples
    Mass Appeal: Liking the new soldier a lot, except the supporting hand like you said. It looks like its just hanging, and not really firm on the pistol.
     
  6. unsuccsessfull

    unsuccsessfull Senior Member

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  7. Samp1e

    Samp1e Senior Member

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    i just had a seizure looking at that

    not the good kind
     
  8. Thrice

    Thrice Elite Member

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    Bump for crits. Fize, just keep practicing the simples and progress will come, do some complete bubble letters if you have to , by that i mean leave some negative space between strokes.
    Unsuccessful-I got a headache trying to read that.
     
  9. smooth_nuts

    smooth_nuts Elite Member

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    thrice-add a simple 3d or drop shadow,loose the weird extentions on the e and h and simple up you hand i mena real simple cause what your doing now is wack man
    unsuccblahblah-simples i cant read that shit...makes my head hurt :-/
    igraffx-the simple in the middle is nice add an ! and do it over and over and over and over
    fize-i already gave you help :D
    haha
     
  10. Fize

    Fize Member

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  11. smooth_nuts

    smooth_nuts Elite Member

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    word...dont be afraid to let your lines touch man...i have no idea where your getting that neggitive space from but it wasnt there :-/
    just keep at it man
     
  12. Fize

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  13. smooth_nuts

    smooth_nuts Elite Member

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    loss the ! and keep working on it man ;)
     
  14. NEZ89

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  15. smooth_nuts

    smooth_nuts Elite Member

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    nice getting up bite....
     
  16. GIzUrD

    GIzUrD Senior Member

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  17. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    late on the bump, why does everyone gotta be a dumbass whose frontin like he's hard. he mearly said you shit's unreadable. which it is. accept it and shut up, or just shut up.

    stoke, that piece is nice, im feelin it a lot. the buildings are wack. but under your situations its permitted haha.

    P.S. if you dont graduate from grade 5, how you gonna be able to pass grade 6? without basic simples, your shits just gonna be unreadable.
     
  18. GIzUrD

    GIzUrD Senior Member

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  19. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    ooooooooooh, i like the fill. very nice.

    i dont like how the G runs into itself in the middle. i think it would look better if you spaced it a little bit apart
     
  20. GimmieGotShot

    GimmieGotShot Senior Member

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    Jetpack; dopeness.
    Gizurd; i like it. it makes me need to get my glasses cuz of the fill tho x.x
    Zen; I like the simple in the middle. Keep doing those

    10 min bus ride home from summerschool broken pencil so i had to use a pen sketch.
    aa54.ac_images.myspacecdn.com_images01_91_l_59dd544495e664403d34be1cc2b7bd95.png
    ( i kinda gave up after the G cuz i thought i messed up the character )