METE, right? i feel the first M big time and even the E after that but differentiate the T, make it more noticeable, and i'd have that long line off the 2nd E go under the letters, not through them. [Broken External Image]:http://i281.photobucket.com/albums/kk212/sneakatack/100_1126.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i281.photobucket.com/albums/kk212/sneakatack/100_1142.jpg ^^ playin around with krylon 360
fuckin around in chem class with a highlighter and a fine point sharpie... old. first woe tag i caught.. super faded Violet flowpen...
thanks, im workin on the handy, i thought it was dope, then i saw propers and gesus's and all them haha
haha the mass one looks sumin lyk gesus's and i like that green woe as well. View attachment 386427 messin around wit diff names
nice and simple start, but the letters seem to be too close, I have to agree that the "R" does look like a "P" and the "T" does look like an "L" just keep writing, over and over and over, your letters will develop naturally you just have to be patient
the "S" is a little out of control, work on a different "e" and just work with new ideas, write it over and over til it flows a bit better
you're WAY over doing EVERYTHING start from scratch with very simple letters we all know we all want to advance quickly but rushing it is definitely not the answer really simplify things so much more and just let it work itself out over time... and for the time being, ditch all of the extra things going on, all of that shit will come into play when or even if it needs too let the handy flo from the heart
the "R" isn't so bad, but i think you should fix the sizes just a tad. the first "S" just seems like it's too big the "S" on the "MSR" tho is pretty dope, it's a little more together yes the "A" needs some work, make it look more like an "A" and dont keep it too scrunched the second "e" looks pretty good too
lose that connecting line in between o and d and maybe make the edges rounder? idk just my point of view dunno bout others crits? =)
criticisms anyone? i didn't get em last time... and offered some hook me up with some genuine internet advice
suspek that first tag in gold is fresh =] [Broken External Image]:http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00385.jpg?t=1215621718 [Broken External Image]:http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00372-1.jpg?t=1215621737