KILS - The K needs to be more pronounced in my opinion. But overall a good throw. KEANE - Nice to see you painting. Nice control too. Good shit homie. SORE, AYTE - Tight DEAR - I would say try an uppercase E next time.
yeah keane i would bring the top bar on the N up just a lil, other than that i dunno. I Dig your steez cat
my first 2 painted peices. this one i made drip purposly. [Broken External Image]:http://www.uploadgeek.com/uploads456/0/new shit 006.JPG this one i like, but i fucked up hard on the highlights, and had to bounce before i could finish. [Broken External Image]:http://www.uploadgeek.com/uploads456/2/new shit 005.JPG
MELT - I kinda dont believe those are your two very first attempts at painting, but if it is, you're goin in the right direction man. Keep it up. And Keane, bets is right, your handies just look so forced. That shit should just flow out of your hand with little to no thought.
some shit from last night/dawn. 1am till sunrise [Broken External Image]:http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/6707/rasek20st0.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/9601/rasek19wp9.jpg ^^^ had to give a brick wall a reach around hah. [Broken External Image]:http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/7715/rasek18ou8.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/2408/rasek17ie4.jpg couple handies [Broken External Image]:http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/1673/rasekhandyle8.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/9791/rasekhandy1dj7.jpg
Yea bro, that black and white one is probably your best so far imo. maybe just make the leg a lil fatter, shits gettin clean man. keep it up.
RASEK be killing it lately. You've come a long way bro. Rocking the simples with pretty decent fills. Keep it up yo.
nah yo theyre my first illegal painted peices. ive only done like 3 other painted peices but they were on boards.
shit i am loving this simple clean as fuck and the letters are all dope same goes for the withe / black bomb [Broken External Image]:http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/7715/rasek18ou8.jpg that was allot of good and usefully crit for me on the past page thanks guys =/ i know was never good at them what you think about this one changed my rsa a bit around [Broken External Image]:http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00390.jpg?t=1215708236 dit this sketch when i was drunk liked the idea so i painted it next morning should have redone the k & first e =/ but i like the outcome of the rest from the ane [Broken External Image]:http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00393.jpg?t=1215708152 [Broken External Image]:http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00391.jpg?t=1215708167
rsakens im not really feeling the handstyle i like the s but not the r and a. the keane is dope i really like the fill.
yea werd rasek work on ur handstyle a little. but a big mistake a lot of ppl do is try to make it super complicating..i LOVE that straight letter u got stick to it and try to make a nice simple handstyle to go with it stay up
bump. keane, that fill is tight. the colors are nice. ive never really liked the flow of your letters, but it grows on you. keep it up
DAMN rasek that roof spot is ill. you get up way more than me haha. id just sat work on tha handsteezy. if anything just dont make it so tall, and make the letters closer together.
ya rasek that roof top is key. but you dont have to post them in both toy and other one just one is fine.
this one is for potential critiques. i posted in the other cuz im breakin outta my shell an gettin more comfortable with my work. soon enough i wont be posting in here anymore