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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by KAMO, Jun 21, 2005.

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  1. I GOT CLOUT

    I GOT CLOUT Elite Member

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    KILS - The K needs to be more pronounced in my opinion. But overall a good throw.
    KEANE - Nice to see you painting. Nice control too. Good shit homie.
    SORE, AYTE - Tight
    DEAR - I would say try an uppercase E next time.
     
  2. BadlilDuck

    BadlilDuck Senior Member

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  3. HëRbN

    HëRbN Elite Member

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    yeah keane i would bring the top bar on the N up just a lil, other than that i dunno. I Dig your steez cat
     
  4. Shiva.

    Shiva. Senior Member

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    keane, i love your fills man
     
  5. Melting Young Minds

    Melting Young Minds Senior Member

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  6. Bets369R

    Bets369R Elite Member

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    keane dope shit but your handstyle is terrrrrrrrrrrrrible lol
     
  7. I GOT CLOUT

    I GOT CLOUT Elite Member

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    MELT - I kinda dont believe those are your two very first attempts at painting, but if it is, you're goin in the right direction man. Keep it up.

    And Keane, bets is right, your handies just look so forced. That shit should just flow out of your hand with little to no thought.
     
  8. JETPACK!!

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  9. I GOT CLOUT

    I GOT CLOUT Elite Member

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    RASEK - That black and white one, and the roofer are fucking illin homie. Nice ups.
     
  10. MUSEone

    MUSEone Elite Member

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    Yea bro, that black and white one is probably your best so far imo. maybe just make the leg a lil fatter, shits gettin clean man. keep it up.
     
  11. GaZm13

    GaZm13 Elite Member

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    RASEK be killing it lately. You've come a long way bro. Rocking the simples with pretty decent fills. Keep it up yo.
     
  12. Melting Young Minds

    Melting Young Minds Senior Member

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    nah yo theyre my first illegal painted peices. ive only done like 3 other painted peices but they were on boards.
     
  13. rsakens

    rsakens Elite Member

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    shit i am loving this simple clean as fuck and the letters are all dope :D
    same goes for the withe / black bomb
    [Broken External Image]:http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/7715/rasek18ou8.jpg

    that was allot of good and usefully crit for me on the past page thanks guys

    =/ i know was never good at them
    what you think about this one changed my rsa a bit around
    [Broken External Image]:http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00390.jpg?t=1215708236

    dit this sketch when i was drunk liked the idea so i painted it next morning should have redone the k & first e =/
    but i like the outcome of the rest from the ane
    [Broken External Image]:http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00393.jpg?t=1215708152
    [Broken External Image]:http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00391.jpg?t=1215708167
     
  14. FLSteele16

    FLSteele16 Senior Member

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    rsakens im not really feeling the handstyle i like the s but not the r and a. the keane is dope i really like the fill.
     
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  15. rsakens

    rsakens Elite Member

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    nice thankx for the critik man i work on my handies some more
     
  16. NEFone

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    yea werd rasek work on ur handstyle a little. but a big mistake a lot of ppl do is try to make it super complicating..i LOVE that straight letter u got stick to it and try to make a nice simple handstyle to go with it
    stay up
     
  17. JETPACK!!

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  18. garbage down tha way

    garbage down tha way Elite Member

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    DAMN rasek that roof spot is ill. you get up way more than me haha.

    id just sat work on tha handsteezy. if anything just dont make it so tall, and make the letters closer together.
     
  19. DEAR

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    ya rasek that roof top is key. but you dont have to post them in both toy and other one just one is fine.
     
  20. JETPACK!!

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    this one is for potential critiques. i posted in the other cuz im breakin outta my shell an gettin more comfortable with my work. soon enough i wont be posting in here anymore:(