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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. rsakens

    rsakens Elite Member

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  2. MarOne...

    MarOne... Elite Member

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    Keane, your stuff seems to be getting mashed, and keep your letters straight and don't turn them so much.

    hmm, idk-

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  3. rsakens

    rsakens Elite Member

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    allright i try
    nice fill thought letters are nice to i like the A
     
  4. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    cabr, that shit is tight. keep doing it. work on your R
     
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  5. T-jay

    T-jay Senior Member

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    everything thing i do to try and make my pieces look more wild and different it doesnt worked then i realized that my letters r just too boring anybody got some advice on how i can improve them
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  6. Tokenkaligreens

    Tokenkaligreens Elite Member

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    right now dont worry about that just worry about making your boring letters as clean as possible, work on your bars sizes some are thicker in places then others. Its not horrible but its not great. Keep at it.

    everyone else on this page nice work.
     
  7. Edward"Sezer"Hands

    Edward"Sezer"Hands Elite Member

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    legit.
    make the c more rounded like the rest of the letters.
     
  8. MarOne...

    MarOne... Elite Member

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    thanks for the positive crits fellers.

    New one-

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  9. iVIBE

    iVIBE Senior Member

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    thats pretty fresh, but at first glance i thought your B was an S lol, but besides that its pretty good
     
  10. seywhat

    seywhat Elite Member

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    for the ranks battle

    cabr- fresh, feelin the letters and fills in both of em
    tjay- dont worry about makin letters "wild", get some simps down even if they seem boring
    keane- i agree with cabr, keep the letters straight and try makin both e's the same
    doap exchange up soon, anyone else down to exchange peices?
     
  11. Hater-AiD~>

    Hater-AiD~> Elite Member

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    sexy fill
     
  12. I GOT CLOUT

    I GOT CLOUT Elite Member

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    Cab - ill. Paint that shit.
     
  13. Gager2.9

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    On the green,purple, and yellow one you should ditch the red lines that come down IMO. The rest looks nice, and I really like the little bit of orange you dropped in their!
    The other one looks really cool and the fill in colors are also good.
    I do think you should have changed the background color though

    but yeah really looking nice!
     
  14. Rodderz

    Rodderz New Member

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    I really like this. Love how it looks shinny.
     
  15. Mass Appeal

    Mass Appeal Banned

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    MARONE...the B would make a sick dope S .. nice fill too .. it just feels bland .. like if you take away the colour all you really have is fattend up lines ... in my opinion

    RANKS

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  16. knightsafe

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    sketch inspired by SKILL crits welcome
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  17. knightsafe

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    sketch inspired by SKILL crits welcome
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  18. Cyto Aka Son1c

    Cyto Aka Son1c Elite Member

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    Cyto Aka Son1c Elite Member

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  20. Dewster_OnE

    Dewster_OnE Senior Member

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    safe- feeling the concept of the s and the a tho i think u could clean them up and structure them a bit more.. the f and e need some more work as well.. keep it going tho