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Keane, your stuff seems to be getting mashed, and keep your letters straight and don't turn them so much. hmm, idk-
everything thing i do to try and make my pieces look more wild and different it doesnt worked then i realized that my letters r just too boring anybody got some advice on how i can improve them
right now dont worry about that just worry about making your boring letters as clean as possible, work on your bars sizes some are thicker in places then others. Its not horrible but its not great. Keep at it. everyone else on this page nice work.
thats pretty fresh, but at first glance i thought your B was an S lol, but besides that its pretty good
View attachment 387709 for the ranks battle cabr- fresh, feelin the letters and fills in both of em tjay- dont worry about makin letters "wild", get some simps down even if they seem boring keane- i agree with cabr, keep the letters straight and try makin both e's the same doap exchange up soon, anyone else down to exchange peices?
On the green,purple, and yellow one you should ditch the red lines that come down IMO. The rest looks nice, and I really like the little bit of orange you dropped in their! The other one looks really cool and the fill in colors are also good. I do think you should have changed the background color though but yeah really looking nice!
MARONE...the B would make a sick dope S .. nice fill too .. it just feels bland .. like if you take away the colour all you really have is fattend up lines ... in my opinion RANKS View attachment 387729
safe- feeling the concept of the s and the a tho i think u could clean them up and structure them a bit more.. the f and e need some more work as well.. keep it going tho