First time posting, didn't know if it was good enough for the other threads so I'll start here.

bottom pics are stickers, I know its not a sticker thread but they're in my bbook.

 

rozwell, for the first: new2graff thread
for the second: woooow
i don't know if it's ment to say something, but it's cool
you don't need crits, you can solve your own problems.


and rana/gager, did you read the new 2 graff thread?
you should watch your bars better and work on the 3d, i'll show what i mean (with ms paint) i'll post it in a couple of minutes..

narotik, i like your stickers, but don't do the whole blue thing at the top piece

 

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damn, my tablet doesn't work anymore ¬¬
anyway, i hope you understand what i mean, compare this with the original photo

 

a bit messy, but lemme know what ur thinking

 

sheltr- your S is ill son. I dont know about underlining the whole thing though. besides that, i like it.

rozwell- some of your shits mad artistic, but i still say the whole arrow thing is way played out. that second one though, the green one, is awesome.


Shiva & Shiva: Keep doing simples. Shiva, fix your R's up. But its good that you guys are staying simple for the time being.

Here's some of my shit. Just christened my new blackbook. Crits would be great.

 

just a qucik sketch but thinkin about paintin this..
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sheltr- im feelin that shit alot
yaek- pretty dope, not really feelin the a or the e though
shoook- keep bars the same width
tare- try makin the top part of the r come out at more of an angle like the t

 

I am completely new to this.......but heres a few......I have tried and tried.

 

ELM- the last few pics were getting to be pretty good. just keep up what you are doing and work on letter structure some more and pen control and your lines will start looking better and smoother.

TARE- simples looking good man. keep it up, and start bending those bars a little bit. i like the upper case A better than the lower a for the record

here is one i did today. better? worse? crits...
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Thanks man. If I asked someone else in the name exchange part to write out elm, Id probably get yelled at.

I like yours! Keep it up.

 

Thanks man. If I asked someone else in the name exchange part to write out elm, Id probably get yelled at.

I like yours! Keep it up.

 

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to scratch yea i know the arrow thing is way over done but i like shit like that, i wanna revitalize it with my style ya dig?
and thanks, i guess it is kinda artsy...and it says Rozwell


shiva thanks for the acknowledgment


-R

 

i dont like any of the last 2 but tare is alrights
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ive been working on this throw all week... think i might give up on it...
any opinions

 

i dig that shit krispy, it fits the name lol

 

well KRISPY i thiiiiiink... you should choose either all squared, or all round corners

 

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new bar method..tell me what i could improove