krispy, i dont really like your p but the rest is good airsol- I would work on your R and L so the flow better, and then work on your O so it doesnt so much like a lower case A
yo that shit's ill. straighten the bar of your P a bit, its laying down too much. ya feel me? and with the loop on your P, make it more like the one on your R, symmetry an it kills a bit of dead space. airsol, keep sketching, its not bad at all. bring the right leg of the A down some more, perhaps lose the dot on the I and make it capital, it may look better. kill the bar in the middle of the R, bring the bar on the top portion of your S out more. lose the bar on your O, make it more cicular. and your L is good
Shiva-I thought the blue made it pop from the background, but I'm feelin' you. Any suggestions as to what colors be good?
got a new jobby and all i have to show for it is more pen sketchies. [Broken External Image]:http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/1862/005zt6.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/2136/002th5.jpg narotik - no clue what that is, looks like mount rushmore melting. no offense. cyto - focus on making all your letters the same thickness throughout. work on having the letters align as well, they look a bit drunk. but a good start. krispy- i've been going back and forth on that for a couple minutes. im torn. the cracks on the letters kill it for me tho. i enjoy the bubble letters tho. airsol-good start, using bars makes it tough to have curves at first, but try a few bends here and there. and make the letters the appropriate size (ie. the lowercase i should be much smaller than the uppercase R). saek- skip the color for now and work on structure. your letters look stiff and bend weird. like they have arthritus, loosen em up. elm-new to graff thread, learn how to use bars and draw letters as they appear on your keyboard. tare- odd spacing on both flicks. good letters, just make sure they're the same size throughout.
Hal.cyon- Was tripping balls on that last one. Threw all I knew about letter structure to the wind and used some of the things I learned from fine arts in the structure, in an abstract form. I know its not legible but I liked how it looked, thanks though. (Everything was more or less melting at the time, on my level of perception, so It makes sense it looks melded in on itself...well to me anyway.)
krispy- i agree... make ur p more upright and make the rounded more similar to the round on the r airsol- get rid of the bar on ur o, cuz it makes it look like an a heres some quick sketches before bed... was kinda tired
just some stuff i did last night, im thinking about changing my name to SHPEL [Broken External Image]:http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk29/wilmacmillan94/SHPELsimpleletters-1.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk29/wilmacmillan94/SHPELBars.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk29/wilmacmillan94/SHPELShittyWildstyle.jpg ^^shitty attempt at a wildstyle piece. crits please. narotik - i agree with what hal.cyon ZEN - its getting alot better i just dont really like your Z SAEK - looks fresh
krispy - looks more like over complicated simples than a throw, throws should be fast and easy to do so work on an easy flowing throw airsol - your progressing, try using those bars to make even simpler letters i feel like your still trying too hard cyto - that looks verry rushed, take your time and clean it up a bit it will make a difference narotic - that is prety horrble, nice use or shading though and im digging the simple hand style, as for your piece you might want to read the new to graff thread it will help you out a lot times - i like your style dude,, not a lot i can crit you on so keep sketching and master your style haha rae - those are some dope throws, locing the hand syles too keep it up scratch & klic - new to graff thread heres a sketch i just did, i fucked up the 3d, ran out of room so i left out the E, and it just didnt turn out to my liking in general but oh well and a couple older ones because the more crit i can get the better (^should have used a lowercase E i know)
[Broken External Image]:http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/893/93243475fc2.png swolen that style is crazy ill
tunka, try putting breaks in some of your lines so that pile of bars will actually form letters lol, if you connect some of your bars to form letters it could potentially look ill cakewalk - new to graff thread
View attachment 388412 ignore my nasty 3d elm its of work on your l and m swolen thts a really nice style i like the one with the vortexlooks like the letters are getting sucked in blue steel i cant read it looks original though i see and a and k i think
kroc - use bars, draw simple letters like on your keyboard for now, new to graff thread will help you out a lot give it a look