follow your own advice and head over the new to graff thread, or at least starting using bars if u already know bout that ish and dont write sick its so played out lol
tape- i like ur idea, but get rid of the breaks in your letters and then find a way to incorporate the tapeyness, lol, but it looks like ur r starting with simples, which is more ten i can say for others... ive got the simples down and im trying to move into different styles crits welcome
^Thanks haha I was trying to just do simple letters and incorporate some style in. Heres the finished product, the color is perfectly in between these two pics in real life haha. View attachment 388488 View attachment 388489
sos- loving the character... keep it up, good stuff sick and tape- go back to bars and simples to get structue down a little better. simple stuff can be the illest. dont try to get all complicated with it yet... here is something i did for an exchange. i know i should be backing off the colors and just working on structure but how is it?
sawp-make hte bars on your a w and p meet and roudn the bottom of your s klic-see cake... cake-new to graff thread,simples,drop shadow inspired after watching war3...just dickign around,not really gonna cont. with this style allthough i might dick aroudn with this one and paint it,idk another r cause i hate the first one...fucked up the back bar
airsol - i'd try to think of 2 dimensional flat letters at first. make everything look real plain and simple then try to work on each letter individually. i see your bars, but don't start a bar in the middle of another. start it before. so it crosses. akso, i think both of those are fresh to def.
smooth- im not feelin the middle of the e, other than that pretty dope. ill get your exchange up soon son, my bad on the wait. your second flick aint comin up for me either
thx for crits [Broken External Image]:http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/4748/59773776cy8.png thinking of changeing my name tare, u need to do a new r shpel, make ur bars the same thicknees all the way through
tare -besides the r looking good my r's suck ass 2 but ya lol smooth- the d and o are dope my latest attempt was bored at work lol crits? [Broken External Image]:http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p331/dark2_photos/005222.jpg
sawp - connect the 'w' and the 'p' bars... looks silly the way it is klic - thicken your bars blue.steel - lookin better here is my throw and some straight letters... some pen sketches View attachment 388524 View attachment 388525 View attachment 388526 and this one... screwed up the 'r' View attachment 388527 and my first canvas- which is supposed to look sketchy View attachment 388528
Make sure all your bars are the same width, and try to keep the style somewhat consistent. What I mean by that, is just like.. if you're trying to make a smooth bubbly style, dont make jagged edges, etc. Play with it though.
its both bubbly and jagged. the tops are jagged and whatnot and the bottoms are rounded... at least for the canvas...
gezur- feeling the 2nd 2 last 1 looks dope no1 ever crits mine lol .. n not like i dont give crits ? meh its all good
dark... fix the 'k'... I mean- the whole thing needs a makeover but the 'k' needs one bad... but you've got your head in the right place- i honestly didnt see yours at the bottom of the page haha
Gezer- The Last two have potental. You just have to make sure that the bars are the same. Yarbles- Keep you letters straight. Also like I said to Gezer make sure your bars are the same. See you "E" Dominate bar is way to skinny.
Haha why lie saying " thnx for the crits " if your not gonna take a blind bit of notice ? .. whatever its your graffiti