gezer- i like ur third one, but beef up the letters so they flo better with the z, and work on ur r cuz im not feelin it aekz- read the new to graffiti forum on how to form ur letters with bars cmon guys, i need crits!!!
He said "thanks for the crits." Maybe that means he will take them into consideration? You're like a blackbook bully, hahaha. Give the kid some time. Anyways, bumping these from a few pages back one last time for my talk.
mar - your fills are always on point aekz - id work on making your bars all the same width zen - drop the characs in yoru throws..id keep working with that first one though...you may have something
yo cans, your throws look alright but you definitely need to go back to bars for pieces. dont really worry about coloring right now, just work on structure a little bit, but im liking the throws... and marone, your shit is way tight. im really liking it. keep it up
It isnt bullying..im just being tough on people to MAKE them get better..pussy footing round people saying " this shit looks good " or " dope shit " doesnt help nobody. Unless ofcourse it is " dope " Again looking nice Mar...i really feel the originality of the B's But what style are you actually looking to settle down with and develop for abit ? .. i mean last week you was doing all this " MDC " , gothic like , gooey green slime bubble , so called " grimey " shit now all of sudden your doing simple and colourful shit .. i dont get it. Whatevs its your work.
Jesus christ, it's like you think by giving the guy crits he's going to suddently get better right on the spot. Sure they may lend a tiny bit of help, but he's still going to need to practice for years to actually develop style into something good. Saying this, I haven't even looked at the sketch you're talking about, but it's the same for everybody, you're not going to make somebody magically better just by giving them some crits, they have to learn by themselves. When I was practicing and getting better I posted virtually none of my stuff in here, never took crits from anybody because I didn't want to hear what other people had to say, I wanted to develop style for myself Nobody seems to fucking understand that anymore. Cabr- those sketches are soo hot dude
^true I negelected to post my stuff for a long time and develop on my own- and I don't think its anything out of this world- but its mine.
Nooooo....you missing the point....hes been doing that type of shit for ages...i wasnt expecting him to get magically better thats bullshit your blowing it out of proportion...in my crit i said " use bars , learn widths do simples " and he hasnt done any of what i said ... why ask for crits if you aint going to one. do anything about it , two. take them in , three . draw it up. View attachment 388597 CHER
CASR - that's sick, how do you do those colors, making them overlap, er what do you use? Tare - Cool and simple but the t and a are a smaller than the others. Make the 3d connect with the letter... Knots - I dislike the n. Now criticize me to death! Thanks.
CREV- thats not bad just start with simple bars and practice those, then go on to bending them and stuff. not bad tho
Soup- That is pretty damn legit. I like the blue and white! MarOne......Thoes are amazingly cool. Thoes colors are 2 legit 2 quit. Anyway, heres a few drawings from this morning. I have read the new to graffiti thread, but am still having all the trouble in the world. The E's are pretty hard, but its the L and the M's are hard as hell. Anyone have any other advice besides that thread? I am sticking with elm.
Yea I can tell you have but just keep doin' that. But make sure your bar IN EVERY LETTER ARE THE SAME Width. And Also don't worry about making them 3-D just keep them Flat for now, And i say you just start with sttr8 bars.
gezer - theres already a geser that fucking kills it, i suggest you change your name. [Broken External Image]:http://www.heavylox.com/uploads_php/35R7g_STOLEN5_18.jpg and heress an s for ranting...
awww no fucking way!!!! Yeah I know about him- his name is not the same as mine. He writes Geser I write Gezer there is a difference... It's like the people who write yelling at people who write 'Ake' when there is already a 'Sake' but i've been thinking about dropping the 'r' anyway because it never comes out right...
was just letting you know if you didn't already know, but ake and sake doesn't really compare to gezer and geser. just my opinion, take it or leave, its up to you. and knews if your out there, you should pm me cause i wanna xchange
gezer, i say keep the name. its fine for now anyway, even when it is pretty close. hell there is a sake that kills it but i still write saek. T-JAY- that first one isnt too bad. try to keep all the letters on the same plane for now. and keep all the bars in the word the same size too. the Y is a little off. ELM- keep up with the bars, but fatten em up. i know i shouldnt be coloring, but i like it. hows this?