Yo clout, for a simple, that looks pretty tight, you gonna hit it up clean? haha take your time with that shit, and get a flick man, I wanna see.
thans for the advicegazm13 and calculating infinity, ill post new thread for more advice on my throwie
Ease - fix the 'a'... but you know that already ...thats all I really got on crits... I was bored... I know... View attachment 389925 the rest are not about christams... View attachment 389926 View attachment 389927 View attachment 389928
reason to shine - the Es in the second to last are alright, kinda remind me of easy from delaware and the third to last aint that bad either but the rest needs to be scrapped. use bars and shit. also, the coloring on the last one is deplorable. more from tonights fun: [Broken External Image]:http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/3900/0721080215wd0.jpg this A makes me cringe, i should have given it toes or something: [Broken External Image]:http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/5800/0720082254tk1.jpg unfinished: [Broken External Image]:http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/4528/0721080320tn3.jpg
Dropped the z put an s Any crits? Still unsure about the k jares just work ona regular throw like the one in the middle. geze that pink an black is tight
just did this, was just drawin, and decided to make some style outta it.. tear it apart and tell me to stick to simple bars though..i know how it is... =.=" Yarbles, i like the E..
GEEZ ... you HAVE to stop what your doing ... all you concentrating on is colour and not letters...you need to use bars and do simples simple as.
your 3d =shit , dont use it for now stick to straight letters learn bars look at key board those letters do em end of.
skuz that shitsss dooopeee woe keep sketching mar, enjoy your orange line king days cause that shits about to come to an end +) oh snap! ahers back
listen... i've done bars- I dont know why everyone keeps telling me that- and just because I said Once that something needed yellow doesnt mean I only think about colour... for aher ill put the 'u'... View attachment 389986 these are all the colours I have... and I know my 3d sucks i'll give you that... been working on that... whatever... I'm not trying to sound like a whinny kid even though it probably looks that way... ima look at the new to graff thread in a little bit... like I already have...
you might think that youre using bars but they arent used correctly..a lot of them are inconsistent, which is ok sometimes..but not when you are a new comer..you need to get your straight letters down to a T before you think abotu experimenting and devloping your own style. Once you get your bars down you can start bending and adding..but for now i suggest you sketch straight letters and stop coloring..your just wasting the ink..i dont mean to sound harsh but its the truth
first [Broken External Image]:http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/justin740/SKON_1.jpg Haven't been doing this for more than a couple weeks so go easy on me. Think i should cut the S ?
what the fuck is that extension? new to graffiti thread is your friend. your 3d is almost on point though.
that shit is way too dark, here you go [Broken External Image]:http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/5773/clipboard01lp2.jpg