Sor - take your time and make everything clean. keep it up Spark - I'd get rid of that extension off the bottom of the k but looks good. Project Link - i like the teeth. honest tho it kinda creeped me. Sheltr - keep the top leveled off. the L is kind of lost also. it has a cool flow tho.
aight what ya think? crits? [Broken External Image]:http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/4668/dsc0005no3.jpg GEKS- looking good, 3d in the second last is off but mostly really good simps SPARKS- good letters, work on the 3D and coloring abit, maybe different markers or when your coloring use long strokes as far as the letter that dont overlap going horizontally. LINK- (most recent) fire background and character, alright fill choice. I would say use a thicker outline on the letters so they pop but overall very good. work on the hand ESCO- its lookin good, fix the O, and change/remoce the kind of bubble things coming out of the forcefield near the bottom SHELTER- prey good just distinguish the letters, i think the outline was getting eaten by the silver fill or something
NUMBERS- yo i like the colors, and it flows pretty good also,all i can really say is spice the letters up a little bit..but besides that pretty raw.. ESCO-pretty decent man, just work on the letter structure a little and add a lil more to the back round.. SPARKS-yo i really feal the color choice and i like the letter style just practice up on the 3d..but besides that... SHELTER-i think if you changed your color up it would make the scketch way more clean..but its original so its all good.. but i think from the guys that i saw i like numbers cuz i like his hole flow he had goin on..nice work bro
Sparks- diggen the steez.. work on the 3-d like everyone said and keep it up. Project- the leter forms are awesome id get rid of the extensions for now and work on the letters but im toy as shit so i dont really know.. Gek- nice simps.. thats what ive been tryin to work on most lately. I know my handys suck but are my letters looking alright? for an exchange.
Sparks- diggen the steez.. work on the 3-d like everyone said and keep it up. Project- the leter forms are awesome id get rid of the extensions for now and work on the letters but im toy as shit so i dont really know.. Gek- nice simps.. thats what ive been tryin to work on most lately. I know my handys suck but are my letters looking alright? for an exchange. any crits welcome.
almost got no crits. snew, try and make your letters more round and try and make them the same size. akel, shits fucken ill thats a style i cant seem to get into. the only thing im not feelin' is the little one with your L. if you would of wrote one horizontally, would of been sick, like not the NE in the 0. shits ill homie, cant wait to see that shit colored!
snew- yo i like your clolors, the letters a pretty basic but they look clean as hell so..what kind of markers do you use..
Akel-Nice i like the L. snew- looks ok something about it annoys me tho. View attachment 391860 View attachment 391861 I might finish it. some shit
Made- is it the fill or the letters.. the m is to wide.. that bothers me.. but yea id get rid of the stars in the fill and do a solid fill. Link- its all about the deco's dude... the only thing im good at is coming up with good fills.. that was my first attempt at doing bars.. other wise its been all simps for me..
Made- is it the fill or the letters.. the m is to wide.. that bothers me.. but yea id get rid of the stars in the fill and do a solid fill. Link- its all about the deco's dude... the only thing im good at is coming up with good fills.. that was my first attempt at doing bars.. other wise its been all simps for me..
haha everyone ignored said. okay, throwie is looking on point, perfect letters and the drop seems tight too. do it in like a black marker on a clean sheet and post up.
deco's alright bro il look into it..but ya ur fill is pretty raw man..but i cant neever do a sloid fill for some reason i dont like how it comes out..