give to get.

 

or we could be straight up and just tell him its wack and to stop painting for a few weeks, and sketch all day err day.

and lose the devil face

 

keane
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yo keane love the letterz but not feelin the fill lookz weird to me i dunno... try to keep it side side

 

KEANE the green on green doesn't make it pop enough. Other than that looking pretty good. A lot of you guys are progressing pretty nicely. Keep getting up!

 

asie-for your a dont make the back slanted and get rib of the little bulb on what would be its ass...
keane-i like the color skeme actualy haha,try doing a drop shadow instead of 3d and it needs to be bigger...im not really feeling your letters either :/
sor-finish your s even if it means you DONT get to do a oneliner...oneliners are mad played

some throws with the new name...x's are a bitch!

 

what are you guys talking about

limes shits ill as-is. theres no need for change. keep it up

 

nuts, thanks for the crits =). last letter is a C though not an E

 

oh shit my bad man....i though i was a line in the top of the c guess not haha

 

no worries, im not sure what to do with that part of the A though. dont mind the lame ass fill here i got bored for a second.. fucked up my proportions a bit, im terrible at sketches

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maybe try a capital a?

bottom page bumper cars...for crits of course!
haha

 

that s is ill nuts, im trying to make faces in my letters too man, lookin' good!

 

Asic nice job.
smooth nuts i really like that style but the on the first one change the six's S
This is my first throwie in a while i have been trying to get my tag down crits welcome
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Honestly, the only thing I'm feeling in that COSMIC throw is the M. Everything else is too simple. Style the letters or something.

 

actually for me the m is the only thing i dont like. make the middle part fat like everything else

 

fix tha u thing u got goin in that M and ur I and tha second letter

 

Hey gusy thanks for the crits i will work on it.

 

smooth nuts freshh

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dope