i dont know why he cant its pretty obvious to me i think your second one has a little to much un-used space
lol, in other words, your letter structure sucks, define them more before trying to do any sort of style on your own
the last two pages of my book [Broken External Image]:http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/oshnap.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/pipes.jpg says pyre within the pipes.. crits please... forsaqen - its a good resemblance. her boobs are funky tho.. squidone - i like the teeth in the S. i dont know whats in the N.. driptool - try makin the letters more even.. glyce - tight piece but the S doesnt really fit in with the other letters.
... Man to tell the truth Pyre the Frist one at the top is way better than the Pie one. Im really not feelin the pie on bro. Looks like you did to much. BUT! I like the Concept.
View attachment 395490 The V might look funky, The I has a venus fly trap on it(my drawing skills aint all that guud)didnt kno what to do with tyhe E or L but CRITS??
^ spend more time on it add 3D's and other stuff and maybe have the fly trap growing on top and not wrappping around it.
make the V look like the rest of the letters then do the 3D but make sure it all goes the same way. i used to have troube with that lol.
NAw Drip Once you get the 3d down Keep doing it to it look nice and Clean, then after that, You can begin to add lil exstra Bars to your letters. Just take your time man.
ok i was just getting bored drawing bars you know lol..ok ill get one down and post it up later got football peace
huh?!?!? it feels to me that my letters have enough structure, but i could see what your saying, if you were talking about the k. but the a/t/s are all good to me in my eyes, i usually take crits very well, but this doesn't seem right... idk. but you might be right tho.
I have my letter structure down i was testing out my letter twisting and what not, but i made the V crazy and the rest of the letters were different...I have my letters down just waitng to move on to 3d now..
came across some good luck today while sketching this on the bus some guy came up to me and says he owns a place where street kids can hang out and get some food and he wants me to paint this on his building hes offered me 150 bucks to do it View attachment 395503 View attachment 395504 View attachment 395505 sry for the shit everythings rough drip no dont have ur letters down at all all u have a sticks stuck together u still gota learn the basic leters cus ur basic letters there look shit still and have no flow or feeling yet keep simples chronic meh im not really feelin it i think the colours r makin up for the lack of letter structure zombies i like it but fix ur tail on the z and ur i is a lil hidden and ur e could use work