[Broken External Image]:http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/Picture001-3.jpg?t=1218141725 [Broken External Image]:http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/Picture-9.jpg?t=1218141743
[Broken External Image]:http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/9135/photo527tg5.jpg rsakens- style seems to be coming along RESP- looks good, keep workin on your letter structure
critz rsaken- love your shit. your fills are nice and your letters looks sweet, a couple things id change(justa couple letters here and there i think ned to be tweaked) but over all i dig rays/stussy- work on structure and flow.. the top of the R is the ugliest part i think the A and Y look ok tho. and ur 3-d is almost perfect, i cant see a problem. re-do it and try a fill -R
rozwell-not feeling it man,do keyboard letters stussy-seems ok,make the letters the same size,change the R
coldblooded-nice style like taht ideia wih the yelow paint and loved tha last one rozweel-dope stussy-dont like taht r and make that letters the same size som shit what do you people think??? [Broken External Image]:http://spa.fotologs.net/photo/58/55/61/made_one13/1218155364490_f.jpg
k, so i wanted to take a break from simples cuz that all ive really been doing so this is wut i came up with im fairly happy with it since its my first try with this style but i know there could be improvements so.... crits plz rayz- the y is iight, the a is ok just lose extension on the back of it, but work on r and z a lot rozwell- i think it looks good... i ddunno why that guy sid to go to keyboard letters
stussy - the Y and Z dont look good to me. idk if they dont match the other letters or because they're too big.. rozwell - keep all the letters on the same angle. towards the end they start to get crazy tilted. exam - really like the 4th piece. just make the X bigger.. skyone - seperate the M and A more. the E is a bit skinny also. love the colors!
rayz-on the right track, maybe mess with the R and Z though rozwell-get your bars a little more solid, like they're really thin in some areas exam-the real wildstyle-type one is kinda weird, but i'm reallllllly digging the simples skyone-maybe separate your letters a little more zen-first, definately lose the arrows sketch i did a little bit ago, turned out so fucking wack. crits, i guess? View attachment 395659 EDIT: i know the fill's weak, i was just feeling super lazy
^^fill is kinda weak...try half n half first then just highlight sections of the letter or something as far as letter structure...i dunno just fuck around with it i guess my suggestions (oh and work on the 3d a bit) -R
nice i am feeling the E & M moe is looking fresh not felling the S the bottom part make it look weird
roz- keep at it, it will sort it self out. wers- looks good. keep it coming. View attachment 395842 this was i sketch but i coloured it in photoshop,i have the proper sketch around here somewere. crits please homeboys