It's hard to crit when the images are so large. The Repto is nice, but you're Dope, right? Not a big fan of the mirror image stuff, but I dig the interesting and unique style of the blue piece in the same flick as Repto. As for me - Fresh paint (some is still wet in the flicks!) not even an hour old: Unoriginal fill, but hey, its my first piece in months. Crits?
vagrant, thats going in the right direction so much potential, the only thing i would do with your letters is in the a the middle bar extends into the letter, make it not go into the letter. Throw a one shot on it, cut your lines a bit more also your inlines do not have to hug the outline. in your handstyle it looks really good just try to keep you letters proportioned.
ignore his comment on the "huggin the outline" i dig the white fix the middle bars like he said... good off shadow love the flares!!!
yeah, im pretty sure having the white highlight not on the edge would look pretty wack. I think the dropshadow is pretty sloppy actually. thanks for the crits
vagrant, for the middle bar on your A, make the lines just go to the bar, dont bring in too much, if you get what im sayin. it was supposed to be a space scene. but it didnt turn out well [Broken External Image]:http://img164.imageshack.us/img164/6079/rasek34bg2.jpg
yo rasek its still a dope fill do u follow a sketch or do u jus freestyle it on the wall? clean bomb none the less a late night mission to a fresh roof top had to book it from the cops afterwards View attachment 396268 View attachment 396269 View attachment 396270 i know the bomb came out like shit o well
Thats a pretty kool fill you got there takin it to the next level i like how you did it. now ya just gotta make sure your 3d on point n work out your lettesr the same size
I think it came out ok. Not being able to finish the blue fire stuff in the background blows, but the letters are clean. I don't think the W and the E match the R and the S though. The W isn't bad but the E or the R and the S could get tweaked. What I'm thinking is if you made the hole in the E smaller like the hole in the R, or make the hole in the R and the top space of the S bigger. Oh and JETPACK!!, your different sized letters are fine. Whats this rule that letters are supposed to be the same size? bull.
its not a rule, you dont know what your talking about [Broken External Image]:http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/7418/v1rp6.jpg kinda old
Before anything, LOL@ the adult video. Now on a serious note, that's a lot better than the other shit. Like im really feeling that bomb, just try to make your letters straight. Nonetheless it's a great bomb, the can control is great. Just make the hole on the E bigger.
nasty piece from tonight. again very unoriginal fill (fuck its the exact same fill as my piece from last night) bunch of mistakes too.. it was pretty dark. lol i spelled change wrong, then had to try and fix it
Vagrant - Your piece at the top of the page is the better one. Dig the handies too, nice and simple. I might say stay off the freights for a lil bit, but what do I know. Rasek - dig the space scene. Very distinguishable. Deco - Good n clean.