7 of my old ones get t crossed so dit some new ones over them [Broken External Image]:http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/crosed.jpg?t=1218447923 not my best fucked up the N [Broken External Image]:http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/piece.jpg?t=1218448327
ark- looks like decent can control, but work on ur letter structure, keep it simple egozen- wrong thread lol btw, how old is that sketch?
Your can control is pretty decent clout, just keep on them simple joints you goin in the right direction1! handys need a lot of work though.
true that with the hands ease. just rock capital letters or something till you can funk em well. that shit looks pretty ballin though. maybe fix up the R a little. how long did that take you? the fill looks nice.
yes easer! big is better, good job. i hate your R though, you should make the kick connect to the loop rather than the spine.
La coka - Those are capital letters? But I have no excuses. Ill work on em. And im not too sure how long it took me, maybe 45 to an hour? Its a pretty chill spot. Wasnt too worried about it. I fucking hate that R too. Havent come up with a solid one yet, so that one was freestyled...horribly. But 'preciate the crits fellas. The next one'll be on point.
I know homie, I know. But like I said, it was a chill spot, so I was chillin on it. And I always find myself nitpickin over the smallest shit no one else is even gonna notice. Gotta get over that shit, and I think Ill be alot faster.
word, whenever i don't need to rush, i jam out hard. i'll spend an hour on something i can usually do in half an hour. but good shit man, its looking good P.S. to worms, i freestyle my fills. i dont have markers. (just say your comment a page back)
RASEK- get loose. you can do them simple stamp straight letters but you should get some extensions going you got everything else on lock [Broken External Image]:http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/7050/dscf0760kz3.jpg
keane - looks good. you have a unique style i like a lot. easer - lovin the simp. i like your older tag though. solar2- rework your letters. the W is pretty wack. youve got the rite idea tho; solid fill, clean lines, 3d is right for the most part. keep practicing before you paint. dear - nice clean piece but the letters dont really work for me. the 3d is also funked up a lil. not bad, just keep reworking your letters. also watch your colors, know what colors work well together.
first off that shit looks about 1 foot tall.. go bigger. and go to the bottom. dont be afraid of the lip. edit: and do a one shot
exam- , looking good but make the a and m the same height as the e x , less u did that on purpose , its all good , Im doing a piece sometime this week so ill have that shit up hopfully ,
keane- I like your style, seems to all fit. the letters and fill fit togather, its clean, but im guessing it was a legal, why didnt you find a freight yard, or a chill spot to put it up. exam- I cant say I like it but you shouldnt care what I think anyway, my crits for you is work on getting the letters to flow better, they seem to clash in my eyes. here is a 2 letter bomb with no 3d I did last night, a character, and a handie on a marquee View attachment 396749 ^^really dark pic since I took it at 2am but I think you can still make out what it is View attachment 396750 the character is simple and easy to put up, thats all I care about with it, its used for bombing purposes, I have much more complex characters I can use but untill Im happy with my can control Im not even gonna attempt them View attachment 396751 2 letter no 3d hotspot. funny thing is I havent even used this simple bubble style throw in close to a month except for last night crits please BTW all these were the same flat black crylon360, I like the line k360s make