south- u seriously cant be telling people to do simples when ur stuff looks like shit. YOU work on simples, drop the extensions and crap fill
Thanks for offering tips. [/sarcasm] I always do simples... I'm getting simpled out I'm not kidding. It's about time I get into something a little more complex, besides, its a pen sketch and its not that bad.
rsakens-is cool i like very much the nolimit and the mist but at the syhe you S doesnt look very muck like one hers something i did crits please [Broken External Image]:http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/2990/92864410jb5.png
sky the D in that throw has potential, try working with that. the best letter in that piece is the M, the rest looks ugly.
sky - simple. no add-ons. that background stuff looks ugly, so make it go away. Use bars. And the e would look okay when you take away all the extra. rsakens - looks cool. Outline all the letters though. I don't like the letters that sink though. CRITS THANKS.
silent- Shut up you giner prick,nice crew name to. Made-the M and thr E are nice try and sort out the A and D, it looks like it has potential. South- i like that style, i think get rid of a few arrows but still keep some they suit that style. Keane- nice stuff. mistix- looks aigghtt. View attachment 396901
Bump Spa-bring your letters closer together Aimr-nice simp..i like that style made-thicken your bars up & make them preportional
fable- i like the way you yweaked the size of those bars made- stewie feels out of place but great color...it rawks imo(dont know how much its worth) i know i need work but am i usin bars right?critz plz [Broken External Image]:http://img369.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan008001cl1.jpg i was about throw it away but i decided to see what you guys think [Broken External Image]:http://img390.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan005001bs4.jpg and this...the first day of schol was boooring
ok,you sir must be kidding me,i'v been doing 1 year and a half of simples and yes,if im telling people to do simples its because they realy need to do simples and please me work on simples? View attachment 396908 View attachment 396909 ok,sure lolz you can say my stuff looks like shit,i won't post up my whole album,since this is already enough anyways,fuck it im gonna keep those extensions aimr-looks pretty dope imo fable-loose the cross's,and fix that R bar on the second sketch,just not liking how it goes down all along crevette-lawl,funny name,looks nice sky-don't know what to say,can't read it well
^get your basic basic letters on lock before you tweak them like that last sketch. cuz when you take away your extensions on that piece you still have a very shaky letter structure under it. kezia
fuck, loosing the extensions aint bad,but why go back to simples when i've already been there and already got simps down View attachment 396913 ???? cmon