snap cool fill but wack letters make that shit flow better and ahem it ok for a straight letter maybe tilt a few letters so each one touches each other. go paint that shit and why do people say "oh do bars, do bars" bars are fuckin gay u dont get anywhere doin bars but generic ass letters like everybody else. id say DONT do bars and do u own shit. might take a bit longer to get somethin u like but once u get it it'll be ur own style and ur own shit. not some cookie cutter bs
fuckn haven't had time to sketch, been playing with an old name again, i REALLLY NEED TO WORK ON MY R's AND K's lol so don't tell me that, i already know
ahem-make your horrizontal bars on the "H" wider so its consistent with the width of the "M's bars, and if your gonna stak the letters under one another, do all of them not just the "a" and "h" ilikekicks-nice, maybe just fix the O on the end so it has an opening like the rest of the letters, not just the swirl. lucky-make the width of the letters the same and lose the extension on the k(makes it look like an r) said-fix the shadowing and make the top of your letters round or squared, not both just my opinions criteeeeeks? [Broken External Image]:http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e338/spikes10392/throw003.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e338/spikes10392/throw004.jpg
nice shit scream out love the steez devil try doing more simple bars new shit havnt schetched in a while
ilikekicks that looks nothing like all your other shit. it looks like my shit but a wack version of it.
correct use of bars separates the writers from the toys, style doesent mean much if you dont back it up with proper letter structure, unless your name is APEX
devil at sea level: good to see you keepin it nice and simple for now although the 3d needs abit of work but practie makes perfect dude atomic: realy feelin it man the stars on the bottom one make it look cool aswell keep it up outline for a piece im doin tomorow so isnt all shaded because its just to use for painitng crits would be apreciated: new stlye ive been workin on not ready to be painted yet needs work:
lines look abit shaky, which makes the whole compilation look stiff, & the piece looks abit squished, dont be shy to stretch it out
you have so much potential but the letters just look so unproportional .. like the kicker legs on the R n K ... theyre so small compared to the rest of the letters ... everything just looks abit top heavy thats all. keep it up.
Atomik - very nice man, very nice. In the bubble things, i Recommend trying to keep all of those lines straight. Freka- on the 2nd one the right end needs to be cleaned up. CRITS?? 123klan clouds =]
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What the fuck are you talking about ? ... This is the biggest load of bullshit i think iv ever read on my 2 / 3 years on this Forum. Utter bullshit...you obviously know nothing about graffiti so before you make false statements like this on something so important as bars learn some shit . How do we expect new people on here to get better at writing when idiots are posting bullshit like that ^. Every fucking writer in the world who people consider dope use bars. Everyone. Its like saying Revok , Rime , Can Two , Askew , Aroe , Norm etc. etc. didnt get anywhere using bars .... LOL .
freka - first one's cool. the lines are a little sloppy though. on the second, make the "tabs" on the ends line up on the same horizontal level. mass appeal - i really like the second one how its totally symmetrical. thrice - get rid of your cloud on top and really pay attention to what colors. kriede - sick style but the bridge on the H is messed up and the L looks like a lower case H. keep the letters the same size- towards the end they get too small. very nice tho!! rsakens - great style. youve got a really tight coloring technique too. stay up. erase2 - GOOD COLORS on the second one, im really feelin it. seperate your letters a bit tho, its kinda tangled up.
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He's rigt you need to not connect your letters learn to use bars properly and lose the extensions DOn't worry about fills yet. erase diggin that style Ahem make the legs on your a more inward it looks too big Move the m closer in withthe other letters. Didn't have enough room for an s