The r is a bit blury from the pic. Mr y- make the bars on the a the same as the ones on the e and k , im not digging the k but the e is fine , Mr. A- loose all the extensions and go simpler,
scream - looks nice yarbles - nice simple sarto - i like the colors, but i think you should of carried on with the 3-d inside the letters, if you get what im saying meko - good color choice and leters are nice bad color choice on my second one, new name so i was trying out a handie on the third
Yarbles- nice simple.. maybe make your bars the same width.. it looks alright tho.. Sarto- I really dig the letters and thie fill, just make the 3d the same distance everywhere, kinda like in your O it goes top to bottom. Noe- Sick throw, i really like the letters and fills on the bottom one. keep it up. Erase- awesome steeze.. those colors work fine together dude.. just space them out a bit more, awesome flow to your pieces tho. i think i got a bit carried away with the extensions. I dunno tho.. i like my fill at least.. haa Crits please..
finally got a hold of a cam, finna post some shit within the hour... got some simples i came by and i'm gonna post them.
erase2 - lookin good, just make your C more apparent. and on the second one with the extension the first O looks like a D to me.. aintnoway - idk man im not really feelin the style.. color choice is alright though. forces - real nice simple, fix up the S a little tho, its kinda weak. snew - get rid of the connections in the letters, add white highlights. deco one - thats a tight piece, i cant touch that 3d style your doin. nice work.
scream- i think the r's better than the k but whatevs...angle the top rght of the k on a 45 degree angle not horrizontal octone-dope aint no-lose the brown bits and extensions on the top-make your letters have the same bar width forces-word. nice simple snew-those extentsions are pointless, and yea i love simple fills i had one like that a couple pages back... critthisplease.. [Broken External Image]:http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e338/spikes10392/throw006.jpg
Before I add an s or a z Any crits? Oh and I fixed the curve on the right side of the a sabs go simpler, use bars. forces that's dope it's got alot of potential snew spread your letters out more and lose those extensions that are inside the letters.
daaaaa was busy again =] [Broken External Image]:http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/Picture014.jpg?t=1219006126 [Broken External Image]:http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/Picture021.jpg?t=1219006453
Keane that shit is tiiiiight. W i wanna work with, but i cant get an O to look good next to it... edit; ehh?