Eh, it's a cool concept, but I don't think it has a great composition. I think that maybe if you cut off a tiny bit of the back part by squaring it up to the right side of the canvas and then add some filler on the left side n stuff for negative space you could make it really pop.
love the one with the jellyfishes exam-not bad but i dont like the arrow on the e my second canvas. its done on paper but w/e. crits? View attachment 401443 sorry about the bad pic but it was too big for my scanner
the thing that goes of to the left from the top br of your E kinda looks like an arrow. either way i dont like it. but thats just me
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everything on this page is lookin REALLLYY good. unsuccessfull, im reaallyy diggin them letters and Bloo. fresh man.
unsuccessful-real tight shit i know its hard to do clean fill with decos but try your best kus in the end it comes out real clean i had problem with my mine as well