hahahaha nice try. Wers Your letters are too fat imo and your fills aren't very good Take your time on your fill next time it's too spaced out make sure your hitting everything Also tell me if I'm wrong but your using dollar cans right? Go over everything twice It's a hastle but i'll make everything looks more defined tester I don't like those little tails or whatever at the ends of the letters make it go straight down
ye doller cans rustos w.e i can get but it hard to take ur time wen ur bombing heat spots right on younge
Thats a pretty fresh style but yeah the 3D is fucked lol. Just practice sketching vanishing point 3D. Trying my throw out with scrap cans. Ignore the fucked up bottom forcefield. And my mis-spelling of thieves. View attachment 402621
Yeah man check the new to graff to learn more about 3d. It helps if you try sketch what there sketching... Helps you see how to apply it to your own shit. (at least it did for me). looks great otherwise, in my toyish opinion. Bow id stick to an open letter or closed letter style.
thanks dude. yeah 3d is a problem. back to the books! ha i think voyr means the R and the P and the E and A. they're both different styles (no middle parts in the R + P)
Yup thats exactly what i was talking about. Sorry if it was unclear. And kurto that inner fill on the piece above is bad ass! I Forgot to put that in my last post.
Lol I must really suck, the first letter is an N. (I didn't do it right, the right leg is usually much taller. It reads NEAR.
^ i read it fine. it's just not that good. try a capital N. and don't make the R look so much like a P.
Fix the top of the S, dont make it come into the middle of the S. And change up that last R, right now with the bottom squiggle its kind of looking like a C. I love your stuff, especiall your stickers. Keep it up!
Who wants in on a paint battle? Rules are any word (your name), must be outdoors not in your bedroom 5 color max. Judged on skill of the peice not the spot.
Yeah the N is capital, you can only tell when I don't fuck it up. But thanks for the crits, this will help me tons!
done in the dark sketch spot, i like the right side more tahn the left lol [Broken External Image]:http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/3949/picture335hr8.jpg
good potential, but keep workin at it. if your going for a 3D affect make the sides smaller and the middle taller
yeah its deff not one of my favorites we had kind of a love hate relationship right from the outline im just happy to get it done lol