yarbles-2nd one as well, and make the K left line vertical to keep flow with that A. Flash-pretty nice, just do a little cleaning on it and please lose the accessories, way too much.the circle things, arrows, dots, and the last letter extensions kind of kill it. still great job, and keep the underline and quotes. game-lose the cursive thing, and make the lines more curved and diagonal so they can fit close together, but lose the C extension and that weird inner vertical bar on the R. Make the S flow with it, kind of breaks the tag, but none the less it's great, also make that E a bit smaller. Great stuff keep it up. Crits please. yay for photoshop.
flash one- i like those last two alot but im not feelin the big circle you put in them. Czar- everything looks good but the star.
Thanks for the crits guys trying out some simpler steezes Which is better? czar it's good but push in all your letters also some of your ahem make your e the size of the other letters flash try not to get too ahead of yourself Drop some of the extensions and add ons seperate your f from your l makes it looks like another a Work on your a more looks kinda wierd and work on your s and h too make the one on the same level as the other letters Also you guys really need to start giving crits.
dj3hac; maybe rotate the S a little to the left to make it fit? FlashOne; nice style, also not diggin the circle Yarbles; underline isn't needed on them IMO, also try not to let the start of the E touch its middle part? otherwise, nice Drunkwriting was a baaaad idea last night.. KOER/JAYS [Broken External Image]:http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/1274/koerjaysky4.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/8461/koerbusstopio9.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/8275/drunkoer2fw7.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/1473/drunkoered4.jpg
i aint gunna give crits unless i get them...ive posted 3 flicks and got like 1 crit lol koer-i wouldnt recommend marker on brick?...and you needa make it flow a little bit more...looks like it took you mad long to do one handstyle its gotta be quick
Aeks- the pink one ur A doesnt move with the rest of the letters...I think u got ur E and K down u just have to work on steezzing ur A & S a lil more...I like ur sharp shit ur rounded out stuff is iight Koer- Ur marker is a lil streaky...and I agree bad Idea drunkwriting...get rid of your underline and work on str8ing it out....I like ur K start frm there and try differ stylez for the rest of your letters to make it move with the K [Broken External Image]:http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/08-31-08_0225.jpg Critique Please?
Yeah people have been hating on my shit like mad lately though So idk even know what the fuck to do. Adre you got your letters down really good just make sure everything is on the same level and prportioned you know? also I wouldn't write dame koer your r is little wierd
I have been? People used to tell me it was good but then all the sudden everyone started hating on it? Idk I'll go simpler. Edit: Some older stuff What do you guys think about these?
honestly aeks to me your tag never really was that good, and I think once you get a decent handy down you'll regret seeing that crap around your town.
yeah you're right Idk I just hate when I got two sides tellin me two completely different things But I'll go back to simple letters Edit again: Simpler Any better? Edit again haha: Word though thanks for helpin me out guys
looks good but wtf is up with the colors maby if it dripped a little more or a fatter marker it would look better