excitus, - do simples dude. copy the letters off your keyboard for a while, read the new to graff thread. you have no structure, no flow, no feel for the letters ahem - i dont like any of your bends personally, i think it would look a lot better with straight bars, but it seems like your starting to get a better feel for your letters. on another note all of your middle bars seem to be smaller than the main bars especially on the M, try to keep all your bars the same width even if they arent a major part of the letter for now. it also miight help if all the horizontal bars were in line with each other, because right now the A bar is lower than the H bar but the H bar is fairly even with the middle E bar. void - good job on the simple, i cant tell if you used bars or not but regardless thats a solid start TO ANY TOYS WHO HAVE NOT YET READ THE NEW TO GRAFF THREAD: READ THE NEW TO GRAFF THREAD
not all graff is meant to look beautiful, the choice of colours was intentional and turned out as i had wanted it to, the quality of the picture is the problem.
use some damn bars. and do that about 100000000000 more times untill you can do it clean, keep all your bars the same width, your S is lacking, if you have to, use straight bars (like a backwards Z) sketch pages of simples, its the only way you will ever improve, dont post anymore sketches untill you have a nice solid simple you can be proud of. once you get that down then you can begin to start bending bars and developing some kind of a style. this is not going to happen in a day, nor a week, it will take months to years of dedication to get anywhere. if your not in it for the long run, get out now.
I wish i could throw up like you mayne...-.- Exitus, what screamo said. just keep it simple for a while. that last ones a start. just keep workin on them and youll slowly progresss. thats how i did.
exitus-make your letters the same size rae-that last piece is fire hang-second sketch looks better void-nice simple
im in, do pocs, i'll get yours up asap but it'll prob be 2 days cus tomorrows my birthday and day after is school
ill take u up on that Cans - theres too much space between ur letters try bringin em closer and lose the extensions some of my whack sketches View attachment 404326 View attachment 404327 View attachment 404328 View attachment 404329 View attachment 404330 View attachment 404331 View attachment 404332 View attachment 404333 View attachment 404334 View attachment 404335 View attachment 404336 View attachment 404337 cover of my new blackbook View attachment 404338