[Broken External Image]:http://img370.imageshack.us/img370/5852/image008jb8.jpg I've been writing for months and nun of my friends is a writers, so I wonder what writers think of my shit, ( I write DONE, dont say its already taken cuz I dont give a shit, if its taken I will king it )
man, you ain't kinging shit with that little tag, esspecially if you're in montreal. as for crits to keep this post from getting deleted, your d looks like an s. fix that shit pronto.
Ipwnfoolz- Keep it simple, after you keep doing simples you start to establish a flow Game ova- Not too shabby im seeing a flow keep at it
i gave crits...awhile ago and stopped because no one crit on my work...what do you mean jesus fish???
Adding more would probably be taking away from the flow, it might look nicer without the star and circle.
gtk. on yours i would say the middle line on the f should be longer.. and the arrow would look good connected.
Are you talking about my tag?.... Yea connect'em try to make the N part of the K and also try to make your letters all the same size or you can make them small and then become more bigger, its just a tip or advice you dont have to do it, you should have your own style tho