evade- i like it. stuffs nice sense- i like the sigs but you gotta work on making the other stuff cleaner another sketch i did. didnt have an eraser on me so its kinda sloppy View attachment 405472
info - like it but i think the bend in you N is a little overdone sense - your shadow needs work hardcore sly - agreed dont use "graffiti creator" websites, like i told you earlier, just use bars and write you name over and over again and style will come with time evade - sick drawings rake - i would say work on your 3D a little more, change up your handy
Cake- go much simpler. Your bars don't have a consistent thickness, and as a whole, there is no flow whatsoever. Rake- maybe bend your K and E a bit more so that they match the bending of the R and A. The K could use a bit of tweaking also. Make the tops of the letters have a consistent angle, if that makes sense to you. The handy could use some work also. You're def headed in the right direction... Evade- Pretty hot stuff there. I'm really feelin' the shading on those. Shook- See Speedy's post. I second this motion Sex- Lookin' good as usual. No offense, but do you ever make anything other than throws? Just curious. Sense- Your 3d is WAY off. Also, try to make it look cleaner next time. Your letters aren't horrible, but making it look that sketchy really doesn't help... Info- Lookin' good. I'm really feelin' the I. Very nice.
crits? Alright, so here's an older sketch and some more simple shit since I was told to go more simple... [Broken External Image]:http://img396.imageshack.us/img396/6808/dsc00554wp7.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/8780/dsc00557vs3.jpg And here are a few throw ups... [Broken External Image]:http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/1455/dsc00559eo1.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img357.imageshack.us/img357/4168/dsc00558vw5.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/8606/dsc00544bx2.jpg
yeah it looks a lil wack on paper but thats dope painted fix the hand tho it really doesnt fit with your throw
aint been on here for a bit yo sex u owe me an exchange meng i write karo now [Broken External Image]:http://http://img61.imageshack.us/my.php?image=232027qn4.jpg dont feel like crittin rite now
fo sho. those throws are tight. and eryx, the pieces are ill, but the characters and handstyles could use some work.
Ohsnap i am lovin this one. But id like to ask what did u use? paint markers or wat?[/QUOTE] nah kid 100% rusto
those throws, especially the orange one... are fuckin boss.. drugs... so fresh and so clean clean rooftop, i would say, stay away from the extensions. skeetz- your right, it is sloppy all the letters are all different sizes, and its almost like they all have a dif style. i like te characters evasion. after a brief hiatus drew this in class, didn't have time to do the E before class ended,, and when i picked it up again i spaced the style and fucked up the E. [Broken External Image]:http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/3874/img0126zy1.jpg